Battle of Ninja - (Cinematic)

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Status : Approve
Condition : Average
Review : 1

Note : The cinematic credit should be put at the proper place such as the ending part of the cinematic or else nobody would notice it. This cinematic doesn't have any music or neither voice actor, this could eventually make this map look dull and boring.

But, the battle scenery is quite interesting to keep the audience entertain. I like the battle scenery between the main character and the general (Especially when you use the slow motion along with animation at proper timing to make him look like dodging the sword attack).

However, camera could certainly use improvement. As I notice there is a few times it zoom to quite a far distance. Which is somehow doesn't look impressive and attractive.

The ending part could be improve as well, especially the victory condition. You should set it to skip dialog & score.

Terrain doesn't look too bad, but it doesn't look too good either.

This cinematic certainly deserve rating 4. However, there is a few weak spot which naturally doesn't convince me to recommend this resources to everybody.

The weak spot is at the terrain, camera, lack of music (Try add some music that give the feeling of suspense to the audience), credit list (Try to make the credit list visible so people could know whose resources you used) and the ending part. Hopefully, it could be even better.

As for now, resources approve and rating is 3/5.

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[Septimus]

impressive battle scenery, but there is a few weak spot.

 

[TrOiA]

Thanks Septimus.