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Anastarian Dreams: Dark Destiny

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Hi! This is for my world of Anistaria. Its a book chronicling the events of the demon wars, such as Queen Scalaiya's Death and Samuel's escape form Dark Hold. Anyways lets begin.....



The mark of destiny was upon the land. The Elves felt it shudder throughout the forests. The Dwarves felt the mountains hard bones shiver under the cold earth, yet the Humans, having no spiritual connection to the land never noticed what they were doing by practicing the forbidden arts of Necromancy. The Elven queen Scalaiya tried to persuade the humans to stop what they were doing, and at the same time the Elves sought out their mountain Bretheren, the Dwarves.

That was when they arrived. Savage Demons from across the void of space. In the battle that was soon to be known as the battle of the Hill of Densil, for the city that was raised stood upon that hill, The Queen Scalaiya was murdered by the Arch Demon Dastranor. As the world awaits the coming of the heroes that will end the demon terror, somthing yet darker awakens from the land, a force so powerfull that it can crush an entire world under its heel, few left alive in the world knew what was happening, but a deep scense of forboding filled their hearts. Only one force, dormant for years would be able to stop the tide of destruction. None now know the location of which this power lies, except for the curious poem that many scholers knew of, but had no real importance to them.


I fly in the sky,
on wings of pure air,
yet on land, you beware,
for ye who enters my old lair,
will tread upon the bones of care,
while you hide among the bed
tremble as you rest your head,
Shadow come, Shadow past
I awake,
Now, at last!



Get mad at me all you want if i stole an idea from you Wich i did not oh ya um any coments on the poem i will be glad to take ideas!
 
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I purposly cut out that part, because the being is a god and has no army of the dead. Sry if i confused you.
 
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!!! Part Two !!!

Ok well now thats cleared up lets get on with chapter two....


Anastarian Dreams part 2



Dastranor walked through the lonely corridors of his fortress. the few brave enough to look at him soon looked away in shame, for he was the arch demon, the lord of all that was to destroy Anastaria. He trained his right hand man to carry a sword and never flinch when struck. Darkstalker was a VoidHunter, bound to forever hunt those who pretended they could control the void and the shadows he was born in.
Few thought he could be slain during his seiges, but in secret he held a boy in his dungeons, the son of a goddess. Each time dastranor drank the life blood of the boy it gave him renewed strength, but he had to measure out how much he drank. The boy had power over the dead, so Dastranor wondered just how much time he would still be in that lonely dungeon. There. His destinatoin was in sight. The throne that had been made woth the bones of slain enemies gleamed white. He walked up to it, feet crunching the weaker bones. He turned around. His shout, feirce, echoed around the Keep. His eyes, wild in the dying light filled with malice as his followers flinched. He smiled. They were ready.


Samuel. The boy stirred. His mind grasping at the word, trying to remember what it ment. Dastranor had been there yesterday on the first day of April and had drank his fill. Samuel had no idea why the demon needed his blood, but his first memories were of pain, suffering, and death. He couldnt remember his family, only the Brute Prison Warden who seemed unaware that the boy was even there, and Dastranor. Even when Samuel despised the Arch Demon, it had been more caring than he could of imagined. Making sure he got just enough food and leting him out of the cell once in a while were just a few of the things that Dastranor did. the food could have been more appitizing, but at least he got to see the outside world every once in a while. He tried to remember a song that had been sung when he was still a baby. Somehow he was able to remember it, the last remenant of his past.

The sky is dark, the moon is high. . .
Suddenly an white light came over the boy and he fell into the sweet forgivness of sleep.....


So you like?
 
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Sry but i cant keep doing this i don't have enough replies to continue.
Plus im quitin the hive. my mother is getting suspicious about hive. sry guys ill still post sometimes.
 
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SAY NO TO ERAGON! and Eragon like books and plagarism.

I have not read it all but if this is indeed plargarized, I believe that counts as Eragon like plagarism.....sort of. Which means....start over and make it better.

There is always room for improvement. Just try harder to make more original stuff.
 
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Really??? Well in that case....

By ORDER of the HIGH ELVEN INQUISITION Of The Holy Light, and The Illuminai.

This work is black listed, and sentenced to be burned as a heretical work.

Unless fixed....

(even though it is not my authority to do this thing...yay vigilante justice!)
 
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