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11:06, 11th Oct 2009
67chrome: Interesting idea, the exaction could use a lot more work though. The pinstripes on the suit do not fallow the wrap correctly, the shading could be worked on more, the suit pants shouldn't be segmented in the middle, the folds in the fabric could be accomplished through shading and highlights rather than the use of line, the tie is blurry and undefined, and other parts of the model don't fit in with the concept very well. The helmet and axe should be more incorporated into the design, right now they just don't fit in with the theme very well. Perhaps you could alpha the axe and helmet horns out entirely, or even transition the skin to wrap around the hidden orc model that does not have a helmet or an axe, just a crazy hairdo and claws.
Also, plan on spending at least an hour on a skin
67chrome: Interesting idea, the exaction could use a lot more work though. The pinstripes on the suit do not fallow the wrap correctly, the shading could be worked on more, the suit pants shouldn't be segmented in the middle, the folds in the fabric could be accomplished through shading and highlights rather than the use of line, the tie is blurry and undefined, and other parts of the model don't fit in with the concept very well. The helmet and axe should be more incorporated into the design, right now they just don't fit in with the theme very well. Perhaps you could alpha the axe and helmet horns out entirely, or even transition the skin to wrap around the hidden orc model that does not have a helmet or an axe, just a crazy hairdo and claws.
Also, plan on spending at least an hour on a skin