Arthas vs Illidan

[Moderator]

22:19, 5th Mar 2009 by bounty hunter2:
A rather unoriginal piece of work:

* Bad story (Grammar aswell)
* Bad terrain (Mostly plain, void of dodoads, not enough tile variation, to flat overall)
* Bad fight scenes (It's just bash bash bash! Die)
* No model crediting
* Improper submission, lacking info and images

You are on a long way, post this in the Map Development Forum to get more feedback, for now, Rejected.

 

[vegetation]

Nerver looked at your first attemp, i suggest you to give a description next time, but cause i have nothing to do and the title looks cool, ill download it

 

[DX Generation]

Firstly,you should add description,secondly add map preview,third add screenshots from in-game.That should be useful to attract members and to be downloaded more times.

 

[ModelTester]

Thank you for the advice

 

[DX Generation]

No problem,always here to help!

 

[Septimus]

Terrain still could be improve and the camera certainly need to be rework at.
And the scenario of Illidan breaking the gate, the camera should not stay lock and it sure was a hell long time to wait for him to break the door.

As for the battle scenario, there is nothing to be impress at. All it show was slash and slash and slash. Special effect hardly show as well.

Apart from that, the camera doesn't show the battle between Arthas and Illidan most of the time as you can seen from this screenshot.

And why Illidan body sunk to the ground ? Was there a quicksand ?

You should skip the dialog and scoreboard for the victory action.

2/5 from me.

 

[DX Generation]

Yea,I agree with him,but my mark is 3/5,terrain must be reworked!

 

[Septimus]

The funniest part would be the outland having a snowy weather.

 

[DX Generation]

Yea,that's really funny!!!

Or underground having rain!

 

[Zanmore]

All this put aside was very good for your first cinematic. 4/5 from me.

 

[Cobbot]

I saw your first one, It was OK. But why don't you use the NEW Illidan from WoW heres the link %26d%3Dlist%26r%3D20]Illidan.blp - The Hive Workshop - A Warcraft III Modding Site

Plus Kael and Vashj shouldn't die

 

[ModelTester]

okay

 

[deepstrasz]

2/5 for FX.