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• Jul 1, 2009

• #2

08:18, 2nd Jul 2009
zombie2279: The whole shape is rather wrong, but the lack of details and shading is disturbing. The skull's edges blend in too much with the background aswell. It's altogether lacking from all aspect and very simple. Work some more on detailing the skull, add cracks, distortions, missing parts or some decorations to make it less generic and simple and rework the shading afterwards.

Rejected until updated.

 

Dmazzz

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• Jul 1, 2009

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There are many of these already, maybe you should take a look at them and see what makes them X-tra good

 

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• Jul 1, 2009

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ahh this sucks i made it like a a quickey really i should just delete it and make a whole new one...

 

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• Jul 1, 2009

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The skulls nice, everything around it is not, you should make the skull come from a corner, directed to the opposite corner. Make it purple not green like the rest^^

 

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The whole shape is rather wrong, but the lack of details and shading is disturbing. The skull's edges blend in too much with the background aswell.

 

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Yep^^

 

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• Jul 1, 2009

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Right i guess i will just delete it i made it in seconds and that's probably the problem.