This is how i made it look after words:)

Making skins is pretty fun, and being able to change the game around and add your own touches is always intertaining

That said, this skin is mostly re-colored and it looks like filters were used on the hair, so there is no way this skin would get approved if you submitted it in the skins section

Also, looking at the screenshot it looks as though you got rid of the alpha channels, if you want to get serious with skinning you should look at skinning tutorials to first figue out what they are and what they do, and secondly how to manipulate them so that you can have greater power in being able to make the skin look how you want it to.

Anyways, have fun skinning, and the more you work at it the better you will get

thanks for the Advice remmber .... This is my first Skin and i haden't Read a Torturial about it