The Brotherhood fleet arrives! Admiral Ulthizzar laughed. He watched as the entire Theramorian Brotherhood Fleet came at his flanks. He grinned as he

Weird, oh so it's yours ^^.. thought they were a fleet sent from Theramore as the name implied, they also have ships who looks more like someone elses' than like yours.
Port Prodans lies on Crescent Isles, and first I thought Cresent Isles lied as part of the Storm Isles, then you said east of Kalimdor and now they lie in southernmost Eastern Kingdoms. Dude seriously keep your lore or it fall apart :O. You give out too much information, bur forget the most important stuff like where you actually are and such.
The entire Storm Isles? Seriously the brotherhood is too small compared to the Alliance of Lagosh to fill out all of those isles. And no pics, no lore. And Ice Isles? O.O. You have a small military, I already showed you once... Yes you have skilled masters of the blade, but not a huge army.

Yeah We hired some of the Alliance Forces that surivived Celestina and contracted them into the Brotherhood Milita. And we also took the civilians and put them onto the isles so that they could develop the lands and ensure that the brotherhood could get supplies for its growing forces.

Wait... Crescent Isles lie in Stranglethorn?

Further east Chr2

Weird when you come from Alterac and how you got relations with the Alliance of Lagosh. Wait, don't answer, you'll proably just make up something that is unlike everything you have made yet..

Huh? what i don't get what you are asking.