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It had been nearly six hours since they woke up confused and without direction. Finally they find a clue as to what's going on. "Alakae look, it is o
The arrow flew up in a small arc and straight towards the center of the crystal. As soon as the arrow struck Alyssa found herself wishing it missed. T
The storm was starting to clear and the morning sun began to peek through the clouds. Alakae had attempted to stay on watch, but the physical exertion
They arrived at the at the closest pylon marked on the map and found a small alcove just outside the occupied perimiter. Veronnis: "See? It's definit
It had been nearly six hours since they woke up confused and without direction. Finally they find a clue as to what's going on. "Alakae look, it is o
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Veronnis awoke to the soft touch of Alakae's warm fur, knowing his companion was beside him he closed his eyes again... then it dawned on him; the wat
Voltair the now decimated home planet of the Lycanus. This once abundant temperate planet has now succumbed to the wrath of fire. I made this for fun
Veronnis

It had been nearly six hours since they woke up confused and without direction. Finally they find a clue as to what's going on. "Alakae look, it is o

Veronnis
Hey guys I want your feedback. Is my Dialogue confusing? I don't like to put nametags in the story to keep it pure but if its confusing you thats just as bad or worse.
 
L2love
From looking at the picture you can tell who is talking 1st but if you can't then it gets confusing and you should add nametags if there are multiple people because that will get confusing if there aren't any.
 
Veronnis
K, on the next picture I used more nametags is it better? I also upated this one with tags
 

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