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Arrival.
Several years ago at the beginning of the Storm Clan, 15 years ago. The Brotherhood of the Sword Arrived near the Dark Swamps in Azeroth.
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Arrival. Several years ago at the beginning of the Storm Clan, 15 years ago. The Brotherhood of the Sword Arrived near the Dark Swamps in Azeroth.

Good things:
-Terrain is much better than your previous ones :)
-Great, that you remembered and mentioned your old lore, about the Lich King war, the war with Trolmania etc :)

Edits you should do in Amargaard's oppinion:
-That huge leader of yours is a human right? Make him smaller, humans do not vary this much in size.. (I know this model has an irritating animation that makes it change size all the time, but try make him match the other's size anyways)
-Always type important words (Names, cities, places etc) correct. The nation you mentioned is "Alterac" of Lordaeron, right? And "The Scourge" is spelled wrong too.
-Remove some additional information, which has never been relavant before and never will be later, like "they became the Naval forces of the Storm Clan and Created the Reborn Alliance...". Why is the alliance reborn, it has never been dead, or was it something you just made up?

Questions:
-That black man with the Captain Loken model, is that Lord Bahram, your new faction leader?
-How can you burn the Great City underwater?
-Anyways, how many Great Cities are left on Azeroth?
 
Good Things
Thank you
Edits
He is human. I really hate that animation. Yeah I will scale it down.
Yeah the important names stuff I misspell alot. The Reborn Alliance is what I would call it. Remember I told a story of the Mawe clan, the Storm Clan and the Pirate fleets coming together to fight off The Scourge. The Pirate fleets were the Brotherhood.
Questions.
No that is not Lord Bahram. Lord Bahram has been mentioned that is Lord Aleutian.
Lord Bahram will not appear for a while.
The Great city, was destroyed, it became submerged as they could no longer put up the magic barrier which made it vulnerable to attack. And the Brotherhood just happened to of heard of it and sent its fleet.
There are only 2 great cities left.
Remember their were 13. 6 escaped, 3 were destoried and Celestina half it was teleported. 1 went missing. (The one of Darkness) and the other two are still alive.
 
Oh, alright. I remember that story, though I do not remember you fought the Scourge. So your new force is "The Brotherhood of the Sword"?

Another hint: Please tell us what we see in the pic, like nobody knew who this guy was until you commented it here, which half of the people won't remember anyways..

Oh :p

13, thought it was 12..
 
Celestina isn't actually a Great City, is it? It was the biggest, most populated and capital city of the Alliance of Lagosh, yes, but in truth not a Great city. Correct me if I'm wrong; All Great Cities stand for an element (Like Great City of Earth, Great City of Darkness, Great City of water etc..), but Celestina has no specific element attached to it. Also the city was built before you got to Quaji'd (Where you may have learned how to enchant cities with elements or something) and all the Great Cities was built when you returned :)

Great! :D
 
Also if you have noticed this army will use two colors only. Darkgreen is the main color, and if someone is using Dark Green it will be brown.
 
I don't mind another faction using Dark Green. Brown ain't a bad color neither. You can decide yourself... :)
 

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