Aftermath WIP 8

Basically, a different image

ahahaha, you can say that ;p Just wait for the final image. I liked uploading the process of the terraining as an album here too !

i really like the open space, gets the rest of the clutterfuck into perspective

the skeleton cat walk haphazardly leading from one shitty place to another is great. the stitching on it is exactly where it should be, i think

i liked the spaceship, made it feel like some military dictatorship. now that it's more of a dust town look, i like the decision to remove the spaceship. i'd be curious to see how it looked crashed, in place of the existing leaning skyscraper, with dust town shanties dotting it

im undecided about the blue highlights on the buildings with the dust town look. i like the reminders of future, but they look sortof clean and maintained. maybe thats just a bias from Tron talking...

the one thing i don't like are the rock spires / claws. it'd be one thing if the model was fantastic, but it's not, and it no longer makes sense. they added flavor when they transitioned from desert to city, but now they're on top of a man-made city. i don't think the Earth's plates see the top of skyscrapers very often. i was going to say what about if it was a junkyard, but they'd just toss trash off the edge. maybe junk they wouldn't want to lose forever though? machine parts and such. dust town -> junk town

Thanks a lot for the feedback @Serenity09 !

Yeah the open space will help me organize the mess of the city. I will try to add interesting stuff in that space too.

Nice to hear we are on the same lane with the ship being removed I could've put it as you said, as a crashed ship, but it is simply huge, and without it being huge I didn't get the same vibe from it.

I hate that problem about the ring thing yeah. The model itself is a great fit for the city, but I can't remove the blue lighting of it. We can say that it still works somehow. Mysteries of this ancient civilization(!)

I added them as if they're some kind of electricity carriers, and as decoration. They might be looking like rock spires tho, I wanted them to be ridiculously big, as you said they can see the top of some skyscrapers. I might think of some alternatives but they might just stay there too, since my interpretation makes them a "part" of the city