Likely failed icon

[RED BARON]

Well, I suddenly got a random urge to make an icon.. and of course since its been a while since I last did one I screwed up and made the original too large and off center...

So yea - suggestions for lowering it while keeping details would be perfect, otherwise I'll likely redo it proper some day. So yea, though it was made to be lowered in size I still made it too detailed. Was to be some sort of purge.

 

[BlueWolf]

I suppose you could say it's fine, the yellow and orange parts are a bit too bold and can be faded into the red slightly,

Personally I think you should bring out your smoke dudes a bit. Make them a bit more clear but don't lose your smoky effect.

 

[Roland]

I really like your Wip, Baron but you should need to Check out the Explosion Tutorials on Google (If you have Paint Sai or Photoshop or GIMP.) I hope you can Upload this on the Icon section ^^

 

[RED BARON]

I suppose you could say it's fine, the yellow and orange parts are a bit too bold and can be faded into the red slightly,

Personally I think you should bring out your smoke dudes a bit. Make them a bit more clear but don't lose your smoky effect.

The whole thing changes when lowered to icon size, but perhaps with the guys. Depends on how I get it converted.

I really like your Wip, Baron but you should need to Check out the Explosion Tutorials on Google (If you have Paint Sai or Photoshop or GIMP.) I hope you can Upload this on the Icon section ^^

Well, if it I find a way to properly convert it to icon size But not really meant as an explosion, more like a pillar of flame.

EDIT: Well I did get around finishing an actual icon or two, now that I was more in the habit again