[Short Story] Scales From Their Eyes // Pages In the Dark

[Kyrbi0]

Go ahead an add "[Shameless Self-Promotion]" to that tag-line header (as well as "[Prodigal Son Returneth]") xD

So you guys probably remember that unfortunately-miscarried Contest a... while back.

Well I FINISHED. Let it not be said that it was a waste! : )

Thoughts?

 

[Vengeancekael]

Damn, that's one way to lose faith.

Great read! Quite fluid transitions, and I really love the descriptive writing that doesn't come off as a bore, since you incorporated the action into it.

Trolls never seemed to be the fan-favorite among Warcraft fans if you ask me, but I feel like you're doing them justice with this piece.

 

[Kyrbi0]

Damn, that's one way to lose faith.

Great read! Quite fluid transitions, and I really love the descriptive writing that doesn't come off as a bore, since you incorporated the action into it.

Ah shucks. You've warmed the cockles of my black, little heart. : )

Any (constructive) criticism, any issues you had while reading? I know it's not perfect, and I'm a firm believer in 'growth through opposition'.

(also feel free to comment on the blog itself /shamelessplug)

Trolls never seemed to be the fan-favorite among Warcraft fans if you ask me, but I feel like you're doing them justice with this piece.

It be an unfortunate effec' a' ignorance upon de benigh'ed minds'a de people. Wit' luck, de Loa, dey smile brighdly on dem, an' Samedi keep dere souls. One day, de word of Zul be spread to all nations, tongues and peoples.