Well,you asked me to play this,so i did so
First,before we get into my findings in the game,i'd recommend working on the description.I recommend a quick overview of mechanics,as this is quite a bit different from normal melee,a quick overview of each race,a short list of features and some screenshots.
ok,I played with 3 races,Azalea Cinderella poison and Golden Spark
I want to start off by saying i like the variety of factions,and how each one has strengths and weaknesses,as well as a role and difficulty.It increases the replay-ability and makes the map more interesting
First issue i had was with the Crawling Chaos hero.His tooltip is not very descriptive,and his abilities are lacking,he is kind of pointless.He has 2 abilities,one of which is attribute bonus,which has no use since he can't attack
My second issue was with the Azalea Council building.It did not have a model,and was completely unselectable,rendering it useless.
Another more minor issue is the upgrade descriptions of the research-able upgrades.Some for example say they increase damage by 9,when they actually increased it by 3
The Orb of annihilation ability of the Drake Rider is called 0Annihilation in the tooltip.Very minor issue,but something i noticed
The gold spark race,think the fact that they can't get lumber except from a production building should be said in description of the race
Also,the production building's lumber production ability has a name that implies that it gives gold,and has the description of the parasite ability
Overall,this map is still very heavy WIP,but its definitely interesting and has plenty of potential
Misc:
I think the creeps are too powerful,they kicked my ass very badly,even with plenty of forces and a hero