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03:26, 4th Dec 2009
Pyramidhe@d: Good shadings and its represents the object very clearly and effectively.
Pyramidhe@d: Good shadings and its represents the object very clearly and effectively.
(3 ratings)
Pros:
- The item is in a good position. Well centered.
- Great perspective.
- It's well shaded.
Cons:
- That lighter line on the left side is making the whole shading loose it's effect.
- The background is a bit messy.
- The hilt guard is asymmetric.
- The end of the hilt is simply cut off.
Suggestions on how to improve:
- Blend in that bright line on the left edge of the blade with a gradient (if you do wish to leave it in there). Otherwise, just remove it.
- Make the hilt guard symmetric. The right side's curve is a bit wrong.
- This sword could use a bit stronger glow and those rays could come only after that.
- Blend those lines more into the background.
- Try giving a 2 color dark yellow/gold-black circular gradient, centering the color in the middle of the icon instead of the 1 color background.