Loners Path

[Moderator]

10:10, 12st Jan 2011
Map Status: Rejected
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[Cweener]

Description is DECENT(very loose term), for a melee map.
I will review this further and let you know.
Here's a tip though, if you can't terrain, you can't make a good melee map.
Melee maps can be harder than normal maps for that reason.
The terrain is key in a melee.

EDIT: tbh, not as bad as it looks from the preview image.
Add some screenshots to the description, to make sure nobody else sees this, and thinks it sucks, because it's not that bad.

However, it lacks in ways.
Firstly, you need to remove some of the boundary around the bases, and add more trees, otherwise I started to need to cut into the middle areas.
Next, you should add a few more environmentals to blue's base.
Then, go ahead into Scenario -> Map options and add a light green(perhaps?) fog. 0 start, with a 15000 end should look okay, not too heavy, but noticeable.
In that some place, add a global weather (if you wish.) (it makes a weather effect i.e. rain all over the map area),
you should also, add a Custom Sound Environment(Mountains would be the best choice here) & a custom Light Environment(Felwood, is obviously, the best choice here.)

Finally, make the paths through the middle trees big enough to fit four side by side catapults in game.

If you can do all that, this will get a 3/5 from me and an approval.
As of right now, I'll leave it pending. 1.5/5

Best of luck to you. I really do like this style of gameplay(labyrinth(ish), so that earned you bonus points

 

[light bolt30]

Terrain is really plain, you should add more doodads and fix the tree's, it's kinda blocking out alot of the path. Also add screenshots asap as many people judge a map by its cover.

 

[Crave.]

Fix the terrain, use BB codes to improve the description (link in light bolt30's signature), and fix all those grammar errors.

 

[Hawk]

The terrain is plain no path to walk too small for a melee map.

 

[dodgax]

i'll try

screenshots aren't changed yet with the moon rays and fog and ect

 

[Cweener]

~Posts merged.
Please, do not double post.
Use the edit button instead!

 

[-Kobas-]

Playable Map Size: 32x64
is just 2 small

Sorry dude that won't work!
Also btw:

Terrain is bad
No room to build
Only 2 gold mines!

 

[Cweener]

Indeed it is.

 

[FrostScythe]

Terrain is really plain, you should add more doodads and fix the tree's, it's kinda blocking out alot of the path. Also add screenshots asap as many people judge a map by its cover.

Well i kind of like the Terraining i just dont like the doodads

Voting:2/5

 

[dodgax]

i think thats a reject

 

[-Kobas-]

Don't think, try harder!
Resize your map to 64x64 for start, add 2 more gold mines and few neutral hostile units and that will be 2/5 (lacking but not rejection)
When you add some more strategic points to map, and improve terrain -> 3/5 in a sec!

 

[Cweener]

I'm going to put this as needs fix.
Take -Kobas-'s advice and you can't go wrong.

 

[FrostScythe]

i think thats a reject

Well i thought the Terraining was Perfect except the Doodads

 

[lightwarrior2]

cheater

first off i say exactly as kobas and in the second screenshot, you cheated

 

[dodgax]

Well i thought the Terraining was Perfect except the Doodads

less doodads? or more?, i'll try to work on it

 

[-Kobas-]

Check your 3th screenshot, we can see end of map there, grrr, that is bad...

 

[-Kobas-]

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Loners Path
Created by dodga ; Uploaded by: dodgax

Review

Map wasn't updated/fixed for more than 2 months!
Last Updated: 20:01, 7th Nov 2010

Map status: Rejected

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