The Last Samurai-Introduction v1.04

[xDeathKnightx]

Subscribing.

:EDIT: Ok, for some reason, my Mini Map Preview isn't working.
So here is a picture of what it actually look's like

My Minimap Preview

:EDIT: The Minimap Preview is now working :)

[GhostThruster]

Did you import it into the map as exactly [ war3mapPreview.tga ]? Make sure it is truevision targa and is 256(2) to 512(2).

[xDeathKnightx]

Originally Posted by GhostThruster

Did you import it into the map as exactly [ war3mapPreview.tga ]? Make sure it is truevision targa and is 256(2) to 512(2).

What about .blp can it be that?

:EDIT: And even though it meet's the requirement's above, it still just show's up as map.

[yamigosaya]

your Screenshot makes my Cursur Click Download

[xDeathKnightx]

Originally Posted by yamigosaya

your Screenshot makes my Cursur Click Download

Hmm, sorry about that. I don't know why that is. It doesn't happen for me.
So sorry i am not sure how to fix that problem.

[GhostThruster]

I may not be right, but I think he is trying to say that your screenies attracted him to this map. The map preview is showing now, can't you see it?

[xDeathKnightx]

Can someone review this please?
Thanks.

[Vengeancekael]

Will give you a review after i've watched it.

Review Map Name: The Last Samurai Introduction Creator: xDeathKnightx Information: The Last Samurai is a cinematic series where the samurais and the warlords are fighting against each other. More will not be said. ------------------- Camera: The Camera work was acceptable, although you should try to zoom in or zoom out sometimes while there's a conversation, or at least make it move slowly. But the camera was smooth. Animations: There were no animations played while People were talking, which you could add to some certain places of the cinematic, but that is not necessary, although it would make it better. Combat: The Combat Scenes were fine, although Julie always did the same thing and when she was killing the rest of the imperial guards, she was floating in the air for almost 10 seconds. Environment: The Environment was simply gorgeous, a forest, the castle of the Warlords, although the only thing that bothered me was the Samurai Castle in the end, it looked like a mess, make everything look alike. Dialog: The Dialog work was nicely done, although you didn't use alot of expressions, but it was fine. Story: The Story is in some small aspects original, but aside from that, it is pretty unoriginal, adding some mysterious things to the cinematic would make the story more intense. Intro: The Cinematic started all of a sudden, with the requiem of the gods song, which you could improve, for example fading the screen and writing the Cinematic name with the creator's name and then start the cinematic. Music: There was only music in the beginning of the cinematic which is really sad, because in the rest of the cinematic, there was no music, adding a "relaxing" music would make it better. Overall: It was a fine intro for a cinematic sequel, although there are alot of things you should fix in your upcoming cinematics. I give it 2/5, but when you've updated this and changed some of the major things i mentioned above, then i'll make it 3/5. Vote For Approval. Some Other Things: •Your -> You're •get's to heavy -> get's too heavy •after what my father done -> after what my father did or after what my father has done •no offence but. -> no offence but,... •your self -> yourself •gaurd -> guard •could of happened -> could have happened

[Warhunter]

Originally Posted by Vengeancekael

•Your -> You're

•get's to heavy -> get's too heavy

That's not right, Your, and You're are two different things. You're= You are.
Also, it's only going to be one O in that to, so he has spelled right.

[xDeathKnightx]

Thanks for the Review Vengeancekael, i will update this asap, But i have one problem. The Music won't work in my cinematic, even though the music is in there. It doesn't work.

[Vengeancekael]

Use the music as a sound, see if it works then

That's not right, Your, and You're are two different things. You're= You are.
Also, it's only going to be one O in that to, so he has spelled right.

i know that, but in certain text spots he has made that fault.
Also, i contacted ap0calypse and he approved it for ya ;D

[xDeathKnightx]

Originally Posted by Vengeancekael

Use the music as a sound, see if it works then

i know that, but in certain text spots he has made that fault.
Also, i contacted ap0calypse and he approved it for ya ;D

Thanks :) And i have changed some of the things in the cinematic, but when you say to zoom in with the camera more, where by should i do this?

Also do you think i should just stick to terraining?

[Vengeancekael]

Originally Posted by xDeathKnightx

Thanks :) And i have changed some of the things in the cinematic, but when you say to zoom in with the camera more, where by should i do this?

Also do you think i should just stick to terraining?

Well when there was a conversation, then the camera stopped moving, so maybe make the camera (for example) rotate around the ones talking very slowly.
Well you've focused alot on terraining, so i would rather recommend you focus on other things aswell, for example the battle scenes.
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Edit: 1.01 Test:

You've not changed alot of things, although you've added warcraft music, which is at least something and i would suggest you the ability to stop watching the cinematic when you click esc.

Typos:

I am not alowed to goto the battle -> I am not allowed to go to the battle

If you change these things, then i'll change my rating to 3/5.

[xDeathKnightx]

Originally Posted by Vengeancekael

You've not changed alot of things, although you've added warcraft music, which is at least something and i would suggest you the ability to stop watching the cinematic when you click esc.

I have changed alot now In version 1.02,
Added custom music.
Given the Esc Ability to the viewer lol