Volcano Terrain WIP

[N.Knight]

I want to make this exploding volcano for a cinematic in my map! Do tell me how should I improve it as I am uncertain about it!!

 

[Piwlady]

Too much trees and they are all same sized / same model.
Also add some tile varitation there. And because it's jungle ( I guess so ) there is much more stuff than only palm trees, add rocks grass/shrub models and that kind of stuff, make it look more natural!

Water is black -> plain change it.

For exploding volcano i suggest you to make red and black sky instead using that green felwood sky.

For lava, try my Lava Tutorial
I also suggest you to add smoke there, for that I suggest this model

But yeah, good start

 

[N.Knight]

Thanks for the feedback! As I have just started on this (just 20 mins ago) I put in random doodads to get a feel of the what the final thing might look like! I will work on this more and will add Lava\sky and other things!
PS: Seriously, man I have learned so much from your terrains!!