Unclown.blp

[Moderator]

15:33, 3rd Jan 2010
67chrome: The freehand work is to sloppy, try using smaller brush sizes to add detail, the contrast from the detail added by a brush and the crisp edges of the selection created around the boundry of the region is to great, it shouldn't be obvious. The skin is rather flat to, add shading and highlights to make it look more 3Dimentional. The colors and patterns on this skin seem more like a sampling of random textures than anything else as well, try to repeat the patterns and colors applied in one area of the skin in at least one more. If you'r having trouble creating your skin you can also check out the skinning tutorials in the 2D art section of the tutorials

 

[kikicamkd]

enjooooooooooooooooooooy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Soul Theft]

List of Bad Things

1. Doesnt looks undead.
2. Bad shadings
3. Not freehand (bunch of filtrers,fuzzy brushes)
4. Bad colors

List of Good Things

• Nothing

1/5

 

[Thfatman]

This really needs A LOT of work. No shading and other than the skulls, it doesn't have anything that makes it look undead. And when was the last time you saw a clown with a blue face? It just looks like you went crazy with the crayons.

Maybe try and put a little bit more detail into it, and add like, showing ribs or something. Make him look more undead.

 

[takakenji]

....just stop posting skins untill you come up with something good plz.

 

[Kuhneghetz]

 

[[K40$]-Spectre]

This doesn't look like it an undead clown. Take this as your inspiration source (not remake it of course, but I think you can learn much from it): http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/skins-552/arthas-61357/?prev=search%3Dclown%26d%3Dlist%26r%3D20.