The Blind Tornado... what you think?

[Goku-X]

Hi! I'm just wondering what you thought of my The Blind Tornado cinematic series. Here is the links to all 4 parts:

http://www.wc3sear.ch/?p=Maps&ID=3796 1
http://www.wc3sear.ch/?p=Maps&ID=3910 2
http://www.wc3sear.ch/?p=Maps&ID=4682 3
http://www.wc3sear.ch/?p=Maps&ID=5213 4

I hope you say things that could help me improve myself.

Thank you.

 

[lorothrigs]

improve......yourself?

 

[WOOTBEANS]

i like everything except the dilouge and the sotry line could be improved