Reino de las mareas

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Date: 05-Oct-13 (14:54:32)​

Critical Errors:​

Map presentation is poor or missing.

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Map Status: Rejected
(1/5) Unacceptable​

 

[Daffa]

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[Twilight]

Description means: Enjoy this great map based on a kingdom in the tides, you will be the best? Prove aki _Dz_Darknez Wings_Dz_

anyway here is review

Comment

First please fix description, use english only, add some screenshots.
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Rating:
2/5

Terrain

Terrain is good, but it is mostly flat, but still good.
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Rating:
3/5

Gameplay

Every creep are not in camp mode, at player 1,2,3,4 have no creeps in start location.
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Rating:
3/5

Final Rating:

Terrain:3/5
Gameplay:3/5
Comment:2/5

FINAL RATING:
3/5

Suggestions
-I suggest you use Daffa the mage's advice, please read the rules.
-Put all creeps in camp mode
-Add some creeps in player 1,2,3,4 start loc.


GIFT

1/5=no rep
2/5=no rep
3/5=no rep
4/5=no rep
5/5=1 rep

Rating 3/5=no rep

Vote for: Need Fix

 

[Darknez]

sorry am new, how can I put some images?

 

[Twilight]

by uploading pictures and the use BBcodes to but them in description

BBcodes are here

 

[BLazeKraze]

The map shape are awesome, But I have a little suggestions .
The game play are awesome too, because the base are near to another base, So the battle can start early . So the tendency the battle is non-stop, for me, these things are amazing . (But I'm always making map with late game performance) .
You used another type of hero, these things are good . But I have doubts in Far seer, I know that Thrall has a different spells . BTW this is not a problem .

Suggestions

-In the description, You need to fix it. You should use map description template here
I know that you are new here but you should read the rules. Used English on description when uploading a map.
- The terrain shape are good , But you need to fix the tile design . You only use few tile design , You should put another tile and mix it to another . Try to add tile and place it very well . You must be accurate .
-For me, putting guard on the tavern are not good enough . Most of melee maps has no guard on their tavern . You must remove it, because some players bought starting hero on the tavern .
-I'm always looking on the terrain . Most of the area of this map is empty , I suggest that you need to add some decoration like shrub, flowers, shells etc . It looks like empty island . Remember, Map with good terrain is awesome . Terrain is one of the important .
-The ramps are so straight, these are not good enough, You should to fix them . Or I suggest you should used height tools .
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Good map enough .
Rating: 3/5