Nothing Interesting

[DUTY OF RS]

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[Celaquil]

Moved to Screenwriting, Storyboarding & Concept Creation section,
please do read forum descriptions more closely in the future before posting.

Also, it might be an idea to introduce your story/game or whatever it is before
jumping right into whatever action there is in your separate "lore" bits. Remember;
while you know everything about your story, we don't know jack shit, so what do
you think our conclusion is when reading this? - Confusion.

 

[DUTY OF RS]

Its not for introduction or something, its something that im helping with a friend with His making heros and im helping him to get a short story for them. So its nothing special, its a reason why i named the thread: Nothing Interesting.

 

[Celaquil]

If it's 'nothing interesting' at all, I find myself wondering why you bothered posting it at all.
Clearly some incentive compelled you to make a thread of it, be that whatever it is, and so
that incentive is what I ask you to introduce. If you made it in hopes that you might
inspire others, then present it as such, if you made it for feedback and ideas, then in turn
present it as such. But very few will feel compelled to comment on anything at all
unless their given incentive, and reason, to why they should.

And so this thread would serve no purpose without us knowing what you want out of
making a thread about it.

 

[DUTY OF RS]

Im have maked this thread so my friend can copy it in the future and use it on his map description.
Im just helping him out, and if you feel that i cant do it, then i dont know.

 

[Celaquil]

Obviously I have nothing against you helping your friend,
but there is no need in making a thread to do so. A thread
should only be made when you seek the advice or commentary
of others. If storing it for future use is what you want, then
I advice you use the pastebin function.

That all said, I don't fully understand why you wouldn't want
what advice can be given on this forum. If the fact is that you've
written these bits yourself. Then wouldn't you want people to
ably help you improve them, or your future writing, by giving advice?

If so, then an introduction is needed

 

[DUTY OF RS]

Okey. If its works to deleted this thread it is just to do it. I have made it on a pastebin instead. So thanks for that tip