Need help with terrain!!

[bethmachine]

Hello there I came here for your suggestion on how to improve this terrain from my map The Ways of a Fighter.I am not a professional so i will need your help.

Heres the terrain

 

[Deleted member 212788]

So, here are my suggestions:
1) Smoothen the tops of the hills/mountains cause if they are pointy it looks odd.
2) add a bit of high variation to the water paths - a few tiny spots where the land goes above the water.
3)add more tile variation to the sandy island.
4) there is a place where you spam blizzard arches too closely one to another, I think you should rework that.
5)add a bit of dirt to the forest paths - the frequently used ones (if there are i mean).

 

[sonofjay]

those toby tree model doesn't fit with the rest of the models.

 

[marko9]

Hello there I came here for your suggestion on how to improve this terrain from my map The Ways of a Fighter.I am not a professional so i will need your help.

Heres the terrain

Can you provide more information about the map?

I would also suggest to use different tree models as Sonofjay mentioned, they simply do not fit. Use some different elevation and smooth out the terrain.

That cave (if it is a cave) looks... well It just does not fit, use the rocks to make a cave entrance, the same ones you used to create the mountain.

On the 'ocean' terrains there is just too much foliage so of that should be deleted, its just too crowded. You can either delete some of them or place them in a better way.

 

[bethmachine]

Can you provide more information about the map?

I would also suggest to use different tree models as Sonofjay mentioned, they simply do not fit. Use some different elevation and smooth out the terrain.

That cave (if it is a cave) looks... well It just does not fit, use the rocks to make a cave entrance, the same ones you used to create the mountain.

On the 'ocean' terrains there is just too much foliage so of that should be deleted, its just too crowded. You can either delete some of them or place them in a better way.

1.That is done I have redon mostly entire maps terrain.
2.For the cave comment there is no cave entrance in any of the screenshots I gave.So I don't know what you are talking about.
3.Same thing goes with number redid terrain noticed that part was a bit messsy will post screenshots showing what I have done so far.
4.Thanks for your post it really helpped out a lot.

 

[Bernkastel]

There's a cave entrance. It's the place with the archway spam.

 

[Strydhaizer]

There's a cave entrance. It's the place with the archway spam.

Reskin the archway similar to the stone to have placed in your map
Well , just resize the archway , placing too many archway/spam is kinda eeeew.

 

[marko9]

1.That is done I have redon mostly entire maps terrain.
2.For the cave comment there is no cave entrance in any of the screenshots I gave.So I don't know what you are talking about.
3.Same thing goes with number redid terrain noticed that part was a bit messsy will post screenshots showing what I have done so far.
4.Thanks for your post it really helpped out a lot.

Ok than what the hell is that thing if its not a cave entrance... also update the screens if you changed something...

 

[bethmachine]

Okay guys will post terrain on what I have done with map terrain so far.An I also have another project that I need terrain suggestions on.

 

[rushing_epic]

your model doesnt fit with your terrainart

 

[bethmachine]

Here is my second project The Devil Within screenshots tell me how to improve it.

Terrain 2