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Moderator: -Kobas-
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Date: 07-Oct-13 (16:02:49)​

Critical Errors:​

Your Map has low quality terrain.

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Personal Comment:​

Use Blizzard cliffs.

Map Status: Rejected
(1/5) Unacceptable​

 

[Remixer]

Remixer's Quality Control
Terrain
Terrain has some lacks, the custom cliffs are unnecessary I think. In this map is only natural height hills and cliffs so why not to go with the original ones, afterall they work better. Also the pathing of the cliffs needs some fixing at some points you could walk a peasant trough a cliff and later build something there. Not good, fix it also there should not be any blinkable areas. The cliff passages are also very tiny at bases also the bases are very small and they lack strategic points, only a one very small passage to enter. However the map seems balanced to me. The terrain just seems plain and lacks some environment and tactical areas. The ground also lacks a lot of tile variations and height variations. It is not illegal to add height variations to water, you can raise it atleast if you do not want to make it unwalkable at some points.


Neutrals
Creep camps are balanced, however it is not needed to place creep camps at starting locations in 2 player maps. Also I do not think using item tables in such small maps is worth it. Also the dark troll camps has also very minor item drops, why is that? The map has frogs which is good. I would have gone with less gold mines and instead using more passages to enemies and like goblin laboratories instead of 4 extention gold mines with small passages to them, however if you like base defending 1 way, why not.


Summary
Overall the map is well balanced but lacking, the terrain needs more work and you must make bases larger. Height variations and tile variations are the key to beautiful terrain, use them. You should also fix the pathing of the cliffs. Also if I were you I would replace Ashenvale stone tile with Village Stone, it is a lot more beautiful in my eyes.

Scores:
Terrain: 1/5
Comment: Balanced but lacking with better tile variation and height tool you can a better score, changing lay out to more interesting one would make it even better.

Neutrals: 3/5
Comment: Balanced yet some camps has too weak item drops. Also neutral buildings could be better but it is totally up to the player what he wants.

Generally: 1/5
Comment: Generally map is lacking, you must improve the terrain and passage all over to make it better also remember to make bases larger.

Rating: 5/15 (Bronze)