demonessHQ.blp

[Moderator]

16:49, 4th Jan 2010
CloudWolf: This has got to be one of the best skins for this model to date The detail is really good. I especially like the like how you have used leaves to cover the body, very nice The low file-size is also a bonus!

Its approvable in its current state, however, I'd suggest adding some more detail to the hair. Currently, it looks a bit "solid" and could do with some more definition.

16:28, 14th Jan 2010
CloudWolf: Just when I thought it couldn't get any better Nice work! The new hair is a great improvement on the old skin, and I think this deserves the full 5/5 now

 

[AIagremm]

Amazing! You should change the eyes though, make them blue or white.
But except that its awesome!, however it still looks a bit demonic. Still, 5/5!

 

[zadelim]

Amazing! You should change the eyes though, make them blue or white.
But except that its awesome!, however it still looks a bit demonic. Still, 5/5!

Thanks Alagremm! The eye changes blue or white? I think the effects not fit! White is like High Elves! Blue is just like some aquatic living things!

 

[AIagremm]

Maybe yellow then? Also, you should make the blade silver or something, because that green on it looks strange.
The bandage on her eyes is strange, but I guess it will look good with yellow eyes.

 

[zadelim]

I will see how is the effect.

 

[Stanakin]

The concept looks good but this skin doesn't look finished. You need to shade the leaves; both the leaves themselves need more details and shading, and the whole area covered with leaves needs more shading/highlights if you get what I mean. For example, the leaves on top of the breasts need to be lighter than those under the breasts. At the moment they're almost exactly the same color.

 

[AIagremm]

Hm, I have to agree with Stanakin.

 

[zadelim]

The concept looks good but this skin doesn't look finished. You need to shade the leaves; both the leaves themselves need more details and shading, and the whole area covered with leaves needs more shading/highlights if you get what I mean. For example, the leaves on top of the breasts need to be lighter than those under the breasts. At the moment they're almost exactly the same color.

I will try it better! Let's how I make it!

 

[Soul Theft]

wow awesome +rep

 

[Misha]

could you try something else? the leaves are awfully blurry D:

Hmm you could do a bunch of brown vines wrapping around her instead, maybe forming a vine-bra with a few open "spots" (;
(of course, don't show the nippies)

 

[X-OMG-X]

(of course, don't show the nippies)

Btw. Nice skin and i really love the idea to skin the chosen unit. As the other says it is a little bit unfinished but it does have a great pontential.

 

[Piwlady]

I actually like this. Very nice concept. Finally something else than DK skin from you.

 

[Kuhneghetz]

I don't like how the hair is so undefined, and I agree with Stanakin about the leaves on her upper body.

The concept is interesting though.

 

[Figueiredo00]

hmm, a very good job, i hate the demoness model, this skin make the model looks much better, but i agree with the other comments, you can improve more the skin. 4/5

 

[Darkmoon Hero]

The hair needs some serious improvement, and more shading is needed (look at the above posts).

 

[zadelim]

Thanks everyone! I seriously want improve more in this skin! Because I got opponent in the contest section! Thanks guys, I will improve it greatly!

 

[Misha]

I think she'd need more skin, less leaves.

the vines are great :3

 

[DevilDuke1995]

you should consider adding these empty spots in her bra and alpha the horns (shes a wood elf) why did you make the blades pink?

 

[zadelim]

it should be. The blade I will change. See I can remove how much of these leaves. I try my best.

 

[Panda]

This needs more texture around the whole warden not just the stomach and facial areas.

 

[cookies4you]

... as I walked along the forest path, there were many creatures in sight. As I approached a spring to bathe, the sound a giggling was apparent. I didn't know where it was from, so I proceeded to undress for my bathe. ~Marcus the Peasant

i like this modo... skin alot. its very good so 5/5

 

[Kuhneghetz]

Looks much much better now.

 

[Arowanna]

Oooh... Awesome!

Recommended

 

[zadelim]

thanks for that!

 

[GhostKnife]

Looks great, awesome detail.

 

[HardOn]

epic! I like this skin very much. 5/5. although you should have put vines in her blade.