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21:41, 8th Nov 2009
enjoy: If it looks like it has taken less then 10 minuts, it probably has taken less then 10 minuts.. So. More shading. This is way to cartoonish. His propotions are wrong, and why is his legs so small? Try to go to google and take a look at what a human actually looks like. And what a skeleton looks like. Either blend out the aura he has, or smudge it. The lightning is barely visible. Make more of it, but make it thinner, and make it stand out more.
enjoy: If it looks like it has taken less then 10 minuts, it probably has taken less then 10 minuts.. So. More shading. This is way to cartoonish. His propotions are wrong, and why is his legs so small? Try to go to google and take a look at what a human actually looks like. And what a skeleton looks like. Either blend out the aura he has, or smudge it. The lightning is barely visible. Make more of it, but make it thinner, and make it stand out more.
