BTNShadowcristalsword

[Moderator]

18:20, 3rd Jun 2010
Pyramidhe@d: Don't submit stuff like this. This is way beyond the stage of me actually telling you what to fix. You gotta know what is wrong with it and you gotta fix it yourself.

 

[L_Lawliet]

TBH.it's too flat.no shading.lacks different color mixing.it's like a creation from laziness.no offense.it's what i'm seeing right now and i can't even see your concept idea clearly.