BTNOverwhelmingShot

[Moderator]

18:49, 12th Jan 2015
Sin'dorei300: The arrows are too symbolically drawn and the yellow glow looks too solid.
The color palette could be richer, tho.

 

[Panda]

I see some things that could be fixed here.
- I would stop using the brown background as a starter, use a black background instead.
- The arrows seem alright, but all that random yellow glitter is confusing, i would make those into small arrows in the way back making them barley visible but you can tell that they are arrows falling from the sky.
- I also would define the arrows a little, and what i mean by define is too make the arrows shape cleaner and the arrows head more sharp.

 

[Heinvers]

I stand by Panda's post.

Less beer haze and an easier maybe black background just enough to emphasize the viewer's attention towards the arrows.