BTNHolyWhip

[Moderator]

20:14, 27th Oct 2015
Sin'dorei300: It lacks a proper object.
It looks like a random doodle, zero shading, color variation, texture, details...
Read my comment.

 

[Roland]

Your English is confusing thus the "HolyWhip" Icon of yours is consist of Squiggles-whatever and adding a light-yellow background making it holy.

 

[San]

BTNholyhairflyingaround

 

[Sin'dorei300]

It lacks a proper object.
It looks like a random doodle, zero shading, color variation, texture, details...
It needs more work, accurate work.
You need to define your objects properly.
Choose a suitable color palette.
Define your object, draw some fitting texture, add some details.
There must be a source of light, so, add proper shadows/highlights to your object.
I would advise you to read some tutorials and practice.
Here you can find sufficient material that might help you:
2D Art Tutorials, Art Tutorials/Books/etc.