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03:14, 3rd Feb 2010
enjoy: Not a bad concept. There's a few issues, however. The bars that hold the creature with the red eyes in, looking nothing more than some grey horizontal lines in the background. The red eyes themselves would look better if there was some shading between the the eyes and the glow around them. The only issue with the 3 small creatures is that they have blury heads, so I suggest you sharpen them a bit.
enjoy: Not a bad concept. There's a few issues, however. The bars that hold the creature with the red eyes in, looking nothing more than some grey horizontal lines in the background. The red eyes themselves would look better if there was some shading between the the eyes and the glow around them. The only issue with the 3 small creatures is that they have blury heads, so I suggest you sharpen them a bit.