BTNDeathBringerSword

[Moderator]

08:34, 19th Aug 2009
zombie2279: The usual, high-level distortion and blurryness, in this case the weird highlight effect is the cause and the messy handle part. Yet again, it overall needs more contrast and outline thickening, and you should divide different parts so they won't blend into each other. I also recommend you completely rework the highlight on it, so it would be less messy.

8:38, 27th Aug 2009
zombie2279: Yet again, looks worse and much messier. Add more contrast to the outlines so the parts can be distinguished, then individually shade and highlight them. Try to use a more visible color scheme for the handle overall, it blends in with the background too much. Also, try adding a glow, so the whole thing is more visible, which also should remove a large part of the mess in the bg.

29th Aug 2009
zombie2279: No changes made, rejected until updated.

 

[The Panda]

Please show alot more of the sword please? Cannot see it.

 

[PsychoNerdial]

This... is... awesome...

 

[The Panda]

Glow makes the overall sword lack alot and that you cant tell its a sword too. Take away all the unused effects in the middle of the sword too bring it too where we can see its a sword.

 

[Dmazzz]

WTF in the main icon all i see are filters.

 

[Archangel_Tidusx]

Looks really blurry and plain. The details aren't really noticeable because the colors are all too similar. add some contrast, i couldn't even tell this was a sword until i looked at the wip. 3/5

 

[The Panda]

Too add to my suggestions, This would be good if you decreased the size of the overall sword and then make it so we can see it. After that make the blade of the sword more see able so it looks more like a sword instead of some staff thing. Then, make the whole sword object straight instead of slanting, that would make it better, and look more use able or something. Also, the gold effect around the middle of the sword at the moment needs too be removed by the fact it does nothing too make this icon look better. (Just telling you) and also the glow either dim it down a bit or make it into the backround instead of overlapping the sword.

 

[TheHunterKiller]

That's one awesome sword, zoom out, though.

 

[krisserz]

The sword isn`t clear enaugh IMO...

 

[BAOD]

this is not a sowrd , it's looks like a green bug face or somthin

 

[olyvian]

this is not a sowrd , it's looks like a green bug face or somthin

naah ;< , i thought it looked cool, atleast very different from other swords..

 

[Iyzz_Fryzz]

the final wips is very high quality
5/5 +rep (too bad i can't +rep you)