BTNDeadlyBreath

[Moderator]

16:33, 15th Apr 2009
Paladon:

Creativity: 3/5
Quality: 6/10
Status: Approved
Comment: Very basic, i agree to the comments, but it works and i am glad that this one is proven to be freehanded.

 

[NiddHogg-kun]

WIP please

 

[Zombie]

Full picture, work in progress screenshots, even though this doesn't look traced or CnP'd.

 

[lieutang]

WIP here

 

[Justify]

psd looks okay and the WIP is pretty nice, good job!

 

[Kingprice]

The skull looks really nice. Maybe you can work on the breath for me it looks like normal air for now i would give 4/5

 

[Zombie]

I'd recommend adding a bit more wave cores near the mouth, as it looks a bit weird that those waves appear to be coming out from the lower lip. Otherwise, it's okay, and I'm also glad that you finally tried something freehand after 4 previous offences.

 

[redragex]

looks alright, pretty cool actually