Improve the description for a start - currantly it breaks the rules.
I shall edit this post with a review after testing.
Edit: Even though your triggering is somewhat acceptable - There general game I find is boring, also why did u make it impossible single player? (I modified your triggers so I could test it) the bossfights arn't very hard as such, there are hundreds of these, the terrain doesn't look good, too short, old tricks/traps etc. 2/5 tops.