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I believe just saying "2 min/minutes cooldown" is better than a long sentence to just say how long the CD is in descriptions.
And "... teeth from its jaw": that its doesn't need a '. "with its story passed" this one too.
In addition, "forging" an enchanted ring may sound better.

Also, hero titles usually (if not always) represent the hero's class, and "Peon of the Horde" ain't a class. You know, as an example Human Arthas' title was Paladin and not something like "Crown Prince of Lordaeron".

Thanks for providing very helpful feedback

I never really understood the difference between classes and titles tho - I see classes as a term develeoped for gameplay reasons only to seperate the different kinds from eachother, while title refers to the correct position of an individual in a society. But Am's class is actually Peon - should I just erase the "of the Horde"-part then?

Well peon ain't much of a class either but removing the "of the Horde" part would be enough for now.

Peon is the greatest class you can get. Don't listen to legion he's trippin'.

Thanks miss, I really like being a peon :3