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Arrival at the wetlands

After a week of sailing and staring at old maps land finally came into sight, their destination was reached. The stronghold
Phoonix

Arrival at the wetlands After a week of sailing and staring at old maps land finally came into sight, their destination was reached. The stronghold

Dude, seriously, could you please be more careful in descriptions? Seriously, its not chat, type slowly and throughroughly.
Wetlands are capitalized, After is beginning of a sentance, capitalize too, The strongholds, same.
Come on, description is half of the pic and you ruin it =/
 
Trees look too unnatural. They are on straight lines, which they wouldn't be in the nature. Aside from that, great pic.
 
oO what? they aren't on straight lines at all! and all... grammar nazi... xD but now honestly there weren't that many mistakes.
 
Size doesn't mater for text. It maters if it informs people who read it. And what Chr meant I guess is that all trees look that they are same height and size. Only 2-3 tress on the right look different then the rest.
 
Actually you could have just made some trees bigger, others smaller, lower them down etc...
 

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