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Aargh, you imported the same music twice! No wonder it's that big... you added an unnecessary 3MB.
The camera (as you already mentioned) is very bad, I won't explain this since you already know it.
Since I also play as Worgen, I think I might say that this is not what Gilneas looks like... everything is TOO blue.
Also, you didn't use a sky (how awesome would it be to show a worgen standing on top of a building, roaring towards the full moon?)
The only thing in this cinematic is:
- Human dies
- Human becomes worgen
- Worgen kills human
- Repeat these steps to infinity.