WIP: Steampunk

[Palaslayer]

hey, this is something i worked on the last hour. n feedback and impressions.

it is in 1600x1200 and i am gonna use it as a desktop background

 

[Saken]

Kind of hard for me to get an impression of what it is and how the end product will be, but I suppose what you have so far isn't terrible at all. Pretty good for an hour's worth of work on it.

 

[Dmazzz]

Wow that is really great, maybe you can make it to look like a giant golem of some kind. Like a http://www.wowwiki.com/File:Siege_Golem.jpg ^^

 

[Paladon]

Looks great.

 

[Palaslayer]

a quick update here.

 

[Kwaliti]

I like what I see. I hope you'll sharpen the edges and stuff, since this is looking somewhat blurry at the edges.

 

[Palaslayer]

hm, i will try to. i am not too experienced with high quality stuff.

 

[Lancer1111]

I'll use this as background, if it is good

 

[Palaslayer]

new wip, 3 h of work now, maybe 4, dunno.

 

[Palaslayer]

moar wip time!!!!

 

[Paladon]

His energized hand is a bit weird angeled

 

[Palaslayer]

not at all. imagine he is slashing from the front left hand and the hand is now following its path to the back.

 

[Saken]

Looks a lot better, it really is coming along, though I too agree on the awkward-ness of the arm, even considering him slashing, it still looks weird how his arm is facing, and then his fingers are pointing up like that. It just seems anatomically incorrect.

 

[ike_ike]

Uh, can't tell what it's actually doing. If you have to describe its actions to people looking at it, you're probably doing something wrong.

 

[bounty hunter2]

Looks nice, but the arm looks distorted, maybe add him a weapon of some sort.

 

[Palaslayer]

hm, i might completely redo it, because i have some other tasks and ideas to work on.

 

[XenoStalker]

hm, i might completely redo it, because i have some other tasks and ideas to work on.

I think it is turning out great for only being partially complete. The concept is really cool.

 

[Palaslayer]

hm, yeah, but i dont really know what to draw around it, since i never made a concept

 

[XenoStalker]

hm, yeah, but i dont really know what to draw around it, since i never made a concept

Well, the general metallic look is really interesting. I want to see it finished

 

[WILL THE ALMIGHTY]

Looks like... pretty much nothing. Start over and design the shape before actually drawing the details and colors.

 

[Dmazzz]

Looks like... pretty much nothing. Start over and design the shape before actually drawing the details and colors.

I completely disagree with you, this is one of the most amazing artworks i have seen. 20/20!!! Great Job!

 

[Palaslayer]

no dmazzz, sry, but i have to agree with will. he is right. it is just incomplete and unorganized. but i will make some new work soon!

 

[Deolrin]

I disagree with WILL too. It seriously is one of the best artworks I've seen in a while. The right hand looks kind of weird though, so fix that and it'll be awesome.

 

[Saken]

If you're able to pull off something great by detailing and finishing parts as you go, go for it, otherwise it's best to get an outline and finish sections that are not going to have to be touched up on later.