HoW BETA Version 3.3.0a

[random.guy27]

It has been a while since I've been active.
Sorry, since I have a busy schedule and don't have that much free time because of school.

Anyway, one question.
Regarding the Dark Spirit remake.

Why didn't you made a 100% REMAKE including the Title (Dark Spirit -> Avatar of Vengeance), the Range change (550 -> Melee) and the whole Skill set?

Are they bad? Don't they appeal to you? Or will they just follow?

Because I specifically made the remake to create great Synergy with every skills, and still give it some fun factor.

I'm only asking these because as the maker, I need to know the details and opinions regarding these things.

 

[lolreported]

It has been a while since I've been active.
Sorry, since I have a busy schedule and don't have that much free time because of school.

Anyway, one question.
Regarding the Dark Spirit remake.

Why didn't you made a 100% REMAKE including the Title (Dark Spirit -> Avatar of Vengeance), the Range change (550 -> Melee) and the whole Skill set?

Are they bad? Don't they appeal to you? Or will they just follow?

Because I specifically made the remake to create great Synergy with every skills, and still give it some fun factor.

I'm only asking these because as the maker, I need to know the details and opinions regarding these things.

It's okey. Well, I think we'll do Dark Spirit as a melee hero, but about the skills I don't know why we don't use everyone. Drunken_Rider must answer this, because he's in charge. Your ideas are really good I like them, but as said I can't decide which one we'll use and to which hero.

I think we'll create one or two of your new heroes, there we'll change absolutely nothing, just so you know. So all I can tell you is this. When you change one of our hero, we may remake it a little and if you create a 100% new hero for us, we won't change anything.

 

[DrUnKeN_RiDeR]

It has been a while since I've been active.
Sorry, since I have a busy schedule and don't have that much free time because of school.

Anyway, one question.
Regarding the Dark Spirit remake.

Why didn't you made a 100% REMAKE including the Title (Dark Spirit -> Avatar of Vengeance), the Range change (550 -> Melee) and the whole Skill set?

Are they bad? Don't they appeal to you? Or will they just follow?

Because I specifically made the remake to create great Synergy with every skills, and still give it some fun factor.

I'm only asking these because as the maker, I need to know the details and opinions regarding these things.

Your hero remakes ain't bad, they are good but when i create those heroes with your spells i remove some spells and add some own to create a fun gameplay with that hero. And your gameplay and my gameplay may be a little different from each other. But as i said, your remakes are good and i hope you will continue with it and ofc you will get credit for your help.
And i will make the Dark Spirit as a melee hero aswell.

 

[random.guy27]

Your hero remakes ain't bad, they are good but when i create those heroes with your spells i remove some spells and add some own to create a fun gameplay with that hero. And your gameplay and my gameplay may be a little different from each other. But as i said, your remakes are good and i hope you will continue with it and ofc you will get credit for your help.
And i will make the Dark Spirit as a melee hero aswell.

Oh. Now I get it.
But to tell you honestly, putting those skills (A Mana Burn and a Damage-dealing totem) don't actually "complement" to his given Theme (which is vengeance, hate, and physical power) and Role. (which is a Tank and a Semi-initiator)

But even though, may I ask, what kind of gameplay do you want HoW to revolve, actually?

 

[DrUnKeN_RiDeR]

Oh. Now I get it.
But to tell you honestly, putting those skills (A Mana Burn and a Damage-dealing totem) don't actually "complement" to his given Theme (which is vengeance, hate, and physical power) and Role. (which is a Tank and a Semi-initiator)

But even though, may I ask, what kind of gameplay do you want HoW to revolve, actually?

When i create heroes i don't decide if they are gonna be "tank,healer,pure dps or support. I take a model and gives that hero some spells that i think fits them.
Then if he becomes a tank, dps, healer or support hero is up to those who plays them.
Like how you do with your remakes, you have already decided everything about what they are gonna be, but myself, i'll just add some spells that i think fits the model best and lets the ppl who plays them decide what they want them to be, there are plenty of items to make the heroes good in different ways for an example.

But ofc ain't all my heroes perfect, there are plenty of room for improvements (and so far it has been many improvements on many heroes) and your hero remakes helps alot

I hope this is a good enough answer to you

 

[random.guy27]

When i create heroes i don't decide if they are gonna be "tank,healer,pure dps or support. I take a model and gives that hero some spells that i think fits them.
Then if he becomes a tank, dps, healer or support hero is up to those who plays them.
Like how you do with your remakes, you have already decided everything about what they are gonna be, but myself, i'll just add some spells that i think fits the model best and lets the ppl who plays them decide what they want them to be, there are plenty of items to make the heroes good in different ways for an example.

But ofc ain't all my heroes perfect, there are plenty of room for improvements (and so far it has been many improvements on many heroes) and your hero remakes helps alot

I hope this is a good enough answer to you

Ohhh... So that's how you roll.
Our style may be a bit different because mine goes like...

Choose a Model Give it an appropriate theme/s Give it its role/s (Support, Carry, Tank, etc...) Brainstorm its Skills, and how its skills compliment each other ("Giving each skill Synergy" is a better term), how it compliments the Hero's theme, and how it compliments the Hero's Role/s.

Anyway. Thanks for clarifying these things.


And oh yeah. Almost forgot.
Don't you want to tone down the attack damage and armor of your Lane/Base offense towers?
I mean, the values are just ridiculous!
200+ for damage and 22 Armor!
And the Base Towers have 300+ Damage and 35 Armor!!!

Isn't that too much even if they are lane/base offense towers?

Why not tone them down to...
1st Lane Tower = 100 - 120 Damage; 15 Armor
2nd Lane Tower = 120 - 140 Damage; 18 Armor
3rd Lane Tower = 140 - 160 Damage; 21 Armor
Base Towers = 160 - 180 Damage; 25 Armor

If you think that the Values are too low, well, they are not. Trust me.

 

[DrUnKeN_RiDeR]

Ohhh... So that's how you roll.
Our style may be a bit different because mine goes like...

Choose a Model Give it an appropriate theme/s Give it its role/s (Support, Carry, Tank, etc...) Brainstorm its Skills, and how its skills compliment each other ("Giving each skill Synergy" is a better term), how it compliments the Hero's theme, and how it compliments the Hero's Role/s.

Anyway. Thanks for clarifying these things.


And oh yeah. Almost forgot.
Don't you want to tone down the attack damage and armor of your Lane/Base offense towers?
I mean, the values are just ridiculous!
200+ for damage and 22 Armor!
And the Base Towers have 300+ Damage and 35 Armor!!!

Isn't that too much even if they are lane/base offense towers?

Why not tone them down to...
1st Lane Tower = 100 - 120 Damage; 15 Armor
2nd Lane Tower = 120 - 140 Damage; 18 Armor
3rd Lane Tower = 140 - 160 Damage; 21 Armor
Base Towers = 160 - 180 Damage; 25 Armor

If you think that the Values are too low, well, they are not. Trust me.

We have already nerfed them, believe it or not x), but honestly, we have played this map very many times and the dmg is alright, even if it seems high. And i want the towers to be a little stronger than usual just to make it more fun to use the nice tower abilities we have created for our towers

I know 300+ dmg seems like WTF?!?! But when you have mega creeps and are a couple of heroes you'll notice that it aint all that good after all , if you dont use the tower abilities ofc

 

[random.guy27]

We have already nerfed them, believe it or not x), but honestly, we have played this map very many times and the dmg is alright, even if it seems high. And i want the towers to be a little stronger than usual just to make it more fun to use the nice tower abilities we have created for our towers

I know 300+ dmg seems like WTF?!?! But when you have mega creeps and are a couple of heroes you'll notice that it aint all that good after all , if you dont use the tower abilities ofc

"But when you have mega creeps and are a couple of heroes you'll notice that it aint all that good after all "
Doesn't this apply with every AoS Games???

And with all the buffs you can give to your towers, doesn't it tell you that you should tone done the power of your towers to balance things out.
I mean, the fact that you could increase the potency of your towers is there already, ain't it?

Anyway...
I have another new Hero suggestion.
His name is Shal Spellbind, the Arcane Disciple
Just look at him in My Blog

And also, You might want to reduce the amount of HP you gain per STR point to 20 or 21.
Sure, in the Melee maps, 25 per STR point is fine because items aren't that much of a deal on Heroes and you are able to create you army.
But in these kinds of Maps, AOS-types, items DO matter. 10 STR = 250 HP and that is much already.

 

[lolreported]

Anyway...
I have another new Hero suggestion.
His name is Shal Spellbind, the Arcane Disciple
Just look at him in My Blog

And also, You might want to reduce the amount of HP you gain per STR point to 20 or 21.
Sure, in the Melee maps, 25 per STR point is fine because items aren't that much of a deal on Heroes and you are able to create you army.
But in these kinds of Maps, AOS-types, items DO matter. 10 STR = 250 HP and that is much already.

In my opinion, your new hero sounds sweet, we'll take a look at him

I thought we already decreased the amount of HP you gained per Strength, but I was wrong... I'll see if we do anything about it. Thanks for the feedback as usual!

 

[DrUnKeN_RiDeR]

Anyway...
I have another new Hero suggestion.
His name is Shal Spellbind, the Arcane Disciple
Just look at him in My Blog

And also, You might want to reduce the amount of HP you gain per STR point to 20 or 21.
Sure, in the Melee maps, 25 per STR point is fine because items aren't that much of a deal on Heroes and you are able to create you army.
But in these kinds of Maps, AOS-types, items DO matter. 10 STR = 250 HP and that is much already.

We lowered the str to 20, and i also think ur hero seems lovely, but we ain't gonna add more heroes until we have fixed those we have left, there is still some buggs to be fixed. But after that we are gonna continue add heroes and your new one seems like a nice one

 

[lolreported]

New version is uploaded! Version 1.6.0a, with four new heroes, try them out!

 

[Chaos lord]

The map is nice, however, when I first entered it, I had problems finding items and stuff. You should really put some kind of tips like in DotA (like level 2 shop) for people to find and create items easily. For me, if it isn't easy to craft items, the first thought is: "Why the heck do I play this map? I better go play DotA!" There were some spelling problems or smth else wrong with English, but that's ok. For now, it gets 3\5 for me. But anyways, the map is nice. I really liked different mob spawns and Boss-mobs. The Idea of dueling, on the other hand, is quite questionable. There are different heroes, and some of them suck at 1v1.

 

[lolreported]

Thanks for the comment! Well, I think we have text that tells you where items are? (Recipe x Shop), but we will absolutely put improvements to the item shops in later updates, that's just not our most priority at the moment. We want to get all the pre-made heroes done so they can be playable in the BETA version.

About the spelling problems I'm aware of this. We're fixing them as the time floats, it's a pain in the ass to check every little string of text in the map... The map gets improvements everyday so it will of course be better and better.

Yeah, I know that the dueling may be questionable, it's just a nice feature we thought some people could like. I know it may be a bit unbalanced, but I may try create some sort of balancing system, we'll see.

Anyway, check for further updates if you want to and see how the map is getting better

 

[Chaos lord]

Well under item info I meant recipe info: where to find every ingredient; no info - basic vendor item, for more complex items - shop name where you can get it. And about dueling - you can add a pop-up window telling if you want to accept duel or not. Still, keep up the good work!

 

[lolreported]

Yeah, I think we'll fix so you can find the items more easily, but as said, we'll do that in a close future

About your duel idea it sounds pretty good. I'll see what we'll do about that, thanks for the comments!

 

[Chaos lord]

Np) I just got another idea: since your map is multiplayer, most of people wpn't be able to try it out fully. You should find an AI-guy) But that's not so necessary. You can do it when you do full release.

 

[random.guy27]

Edited.

Other than the AI things.
You should probably add a "Single Player" options that lets you lvl up the Hero at any level at any time, the capability to pick more than one Hero, and stuffs like that.

It will be helpful for the Beta Testers (like me) to spot the imbalances, the potential of a Hero, and the needs of a Hero in a shorter time.
Restarting the whole game per Hero could get really tiring and boring...

And a concern about the new Hero, Moon Devil.
One of the models that I love and is pretty bad-ass, but the skills... are another topic.
I may be creating a remake for him sometime soon, to compliment its bad-ass model.
Sorry. That's just how much I love that model. Hope you understand.

 

[lolreported]

@Chaos lord: We've already got a comment about adding an AI and I think I'll try do something about this, but this won't be added in a couple of versions, because, firstly, I don't understand the core of an AI and I don't understand how I shall do it. So I must do some study first then, hehe.

@random.guy27: Yeah, I can add a single player option with commands that allow single players to be able to test the map more easier. I'll fix this today and will release a small update in a short time, I'll start right away. (We actually have implented commands that allow us makers to level up and get x gold anytime, but I'll make it public).

Yeah, I understand you, but on the other hand it's Drunken_Riders hero, so you'll have to talk with him and see what he thinks. It doesn't matter for me, except that I'm triggering the heroes so I'll get all the work, haha.

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Edit 1: Okey, the new version is done with the single player feature. If you request more commands, just tell me those here and I'll see if I can fix them. I'll upload the new version in a few minutes.

Edit 2: The new version is uploaded (1.6.0b)! Check the patchlog for information about the update.

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Edit 3: Two downloads to go before this map has been downloaded 1000 times!

 

[Titania]

Fix your spellings,the assassin is REALLY inbalanced

 

[DrUnKeN_RiDeR]

Fix your spellings,the assassin is REALLY inbalanced

Well, to begin with, you could tell us what it is you think thats make that hero so inbalanced instead of just say: This hero is so inbalanced!

If you want us to fix it you'll need to say more than that mate

Hope to hear from you again with some info we can work with

 

[DrUnKeN_RiDeR]

The map is nice, however, when I first entered it, I had problems finding items and stuff. You should really put some kind of tips like in DotA (like level 2 shop) for people to find and create items easily. For me, if it isn't easy to craft items, the first thought is: "Why the heck do I play this map? I better go play DotA!" There were some spelling problems or smth else wrong with English, but that's ok. For now, it gets 3\5 for me. But anyways, the map is nice. I really liked different mob spawns and Boss-mobs. The Idea of dueling, on the other hand, is quite questionable. There are different heroes, and some of them suck at 1v1.

Hi im glad you liked our map, you said that this first time you entered this map, you had problems finding the stuff and that was clearly a big issue.
Well, please answer this question for me. was it easy for you to find everything in Dota when you played it for your first time? Did you from just one try know where everything were? Cuz i didnt :S

About the dueling arena, we are gonna add a vote to every player so the players can vote yes or no before every duel. and if the score goes 5-5 it wont be a duel. I think that will solve a big part with the duel arena.

Thanks for your feedback

 

[Titania]

The assassin needs a ability that matches an assassin,have you ever seen a real one throwing a net and run over it and fight it's enemy face to face?Do something like a backstab but make it more special so it won't resemble Dota

 

[random.guy27]

First of all, It's "Imbalance" not "Inbalance"

Second, is the Assassin the green Human-troll looking lady?
If yes. Then I really don't like the model/skin. The Warden model is better, and it uses its Voice!
Pick from the two models:

OR

These to models are better than the current model used and they don't require MSI since they are in-game.
Just saying.

Anyway, I may also be creating a remake for the Assassin since its skills are basically taken from the Warcraft Melee maps => An Ensare, a Mirror Image, a Movement Speed Self-buff, and a Permanent Invisibility, not that fun if you ask me.

EDITED.
I've already made a REMAKE for the Assassin.
Meet...

Shira Darkedge, the Nether Assassin
To see her, look at her in My Blog

And for Plague Reverant.
Defiled Tempest
• Increase the visual effect. It's too small.
• Decrease the cooldown from 15 to 10 seconds because this should be his spammable spell.

Plague of Locust - It's currently underpowered ATM(At The Moment).
• Increase its duration from 8 seconds to 20 seconds. (I made it 8 seconds in my suggestion because it should originally be a channeling spell, but I think it's fine even if it's not a channeling spell.)
• Increase the locust count from 10/14/18 to 12/16/20.
• Decrease the cooldown from 110 to 90 seconds.
• Rescale the Mana Cost from 175 at all levels to 150/225/300, to keep the balance.

 

[lolreported]

Yes, I think she is. I like those two models, but it's up to Drunken_Rider to decide if we shall use one of those models instead. Firstly, I think it's a good idea, because then we can remove the model from the map and decrease the map size and secondly, it's a good assassin model.

Yeah, do create a remake if you feel to and we'll see what we'll do about it

About the Defiled Tempest I'll check out the visual effects and see what I can do and I'll ask Drunken_Rider about the cooldown.

I think Plague of Locust is overpowered, but I don't know I may mix up this ability with another one, I'll take a look at that too. Thanks for the feedback as always!


Edit 1: I just took a look at all the heroes. It's only 16 heroes left to get done and then all 54 pre-made heroes will be finished! The next patch will contain at-least three new heroes and I think I'll do a terrain-remake at the Outcasts area.

 

[DrUnKeN_RiDeR]

Anyway, I may also be creating a remake for the Assassin since its skills are basically taken from the Warcraft Melee maps => An Ensare, a Mirror Image, a Movement Speed Self-buff, and a Permanent Invisibility, not that fun if you ask me.

EDITED.
I've already made a REMAKE for the Assassin.
Meet...

Shira Darkedge, the Nether Assassin
To see her, look at her in My Blog

I liked some of the spells you made with the assasin, i will mix your hero with the current assasin if you dont mind?

Using: Shadow Bane
Nightmare Edge as a lvl 5 ability
A nerfed version of her copy ability
invisibility as her ullti because i think that will create some fear into the opponents

 

[lolreported]

A new version is done. I'll upload it in a few minutes. We noticed that patch 1.6.0a and patch 1.6.0b was extremely unstable... The whole map was acting weird and got very laggy. That's fixed in this new patch (1.7.0a). This new patch also contains two new heroes, Murloc of the Damned and Naga Emperor.


Edit 1: The new patch is uploaded (1.7.0a), please download this one, because as I said, the older patches where extremely unstable. I hope this patch is stable. Thanks! (Don't forget to read the patchlog/changelog for updates)

 

[random.guy27]

I liked some of the spells you made with the assasin, i will mix your hero with the current assasin if you dont mind?

Using: Shadow Bane
Nightmare Edge as a lvl 5 ability
A nerfed version of her copy ability
invisibility as her ullti because i think that will create some fear into the opponents

Hmm...
I still have some things to reconsider.

Why not just make Nightmare Edge her Ulti? It's far too good for a Basic Skill.

And for the Mirror Image skill, I'm still having second thoughts regarding it. Because for me, it doesn't scream that much "Assassin". Assassins are supposed to kill their prey as quickly and quietly as possible, and having many of you in a situation doesn't sound quiet to me, though it does offer some synergy with "Shadow Bane"
But I think "True Assassin" offers more synergy, (Shadow Bane and Nightmare Edge) and it's a Passive skill. I specifically made her INT and INT gain low because she won't be spamming her spells that much, and is also the reason why the Mana Cost of her spells are low, but are actually somewhat high for these kinds of Heroes.

And so she will still have an Invisible skill, why not just an active "Permanent invisiblity" type ability for a basic skill, but with a twist?
Like...

Assassin's Mark

Shira marks her next prey and tracks it for 20 seconds or until it dies. As long as Shira is near her marked prey, she will become invisible. Fade/Recloaking time reduces per level

Level 1 - Grants Shira invisibility when at least 400 units near the marked unit. Fade/Recloaking time is 3.5 seconds.
Level 2 - Grants Shira invisibility when at least 550 units near the marked unit. Fade/Recloaking time is 3 seconds.
Level 3 - Grants Shira invisibility when at least 700 units near the marked unit. Fade/Recloaking time is 2.5 seconds.
Level 4 - Grants Shira invisibility when at least 850 units near the marked unit. Fade/Recloaking time is 2 seconds.
Level 5 - Grants Shira invisibility when at least 1000 units near the marked unit. Fade/Recloaking time is 1.5 seconds.

In Depth Explanation
• Casting Range is 600/700/800/900/1000
• Gain a 300/300 Vision of the target

Cooldown: 18 sec
Mana Cost: 60

This one is better for her Invisibility Skill and it fits her theme so much!
You mark your prey and track its every move, then you become undetected when near it. Perfect for an Assassin. A Nether Assassin.

 

[DrUnKeN_RiDeR]

Hmm...
I still have some things to reconsider.

Why not just make Nightmare Edge her Ulti? It's far too good for a Basic Skill.

And for the Mirror Image skill, I'm still having second thoughts regarding it. Because for me, it doesn't scream that much "Assassin". Assassins are supposed to kill their prey as quickly and quietly as possible, and having many of you in a situation doesn't sound quiet to me, though it does offer some synergy with "Shadow Bane"
But I think "True Assassin" offers more synergy, (Shadow Bane and Nightmare Edge) and it's a Passive skill. I specifically made her INT and INT gain low because she won't be spamming her spells that much, and is also the reason why the Mana Cost of her spells are low, but are actually somewhat high for these kinds of Heroes.

Im going to make the assasin like this:

-Shadow Bane
-the new invisibility skill you made
-Phantom Strike
-Nightmare Edge as her ullti

I like it, but we might rebalance the skills, cuz we have different ways of what is "balanced" and tnx for help

 

[random.guy27]

Im going to make the assasin like this:

-Shadow Bane
-the new invisibility skill you made
-Phantom Strike
-Nightmare Edge as her ullti

I like it, but we might rebalance the skills, cuz we have different ways of what is "balanced" and tnx for help

Why Phantom Strike?
You already have the invisible to be able to get near your target.
"True Assassin" is a better choice since it helps you a lot and has synergy with her spells, and it's a Passive skill.

Ok. But could you give me a draft of your "Rebalanced skills" through PM?
I would like to look at it first even though we have a different point of view with "Balance"

 

[DrUnKeN_RiDeR]

Why Phantom Strike?
You already have the invisible to be able to get near your target.
"True Assassin" is a better choice since it helps you a lot and has synergy with her spells, and it's a Passive skill.

Ok. But could you give me a draft of your "Rebalanced skills" through PM?
I would like to look at it first even though we have a different point of view with "Balance"

Sure, we will let you know before the release

 

[Titania]

Well you could use more description in the loading screen

 

[lolreported]

Well you could use more description in the loading screen

Okey and how can it be improved? Example please

 

[Titania]

Okey and how can it be improved? Example please

Well tell the gamers about the game and explain how to play would be good

 

[lolreported]

Well tell the gamers about the game and explain how to play would be good

That will be to much, we won't be able to fit all that information on a loading screen. Players better try it single player or play a test round and learn how to play instead.


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Edit: A new patch has been uploaded! Patch 1.8.0a. It's a very small patch, but I had nothing to do so... This patch contains a new hero (Unknown Shadow) and some fixes regarding the Magic Twister. Download it now!

 

[random.guy27]

Couples of changes...

For Plague Reverant:

>>>

The color of the current Icon is pretty "clean" for the Plague Reverant.

The suggested icon is from the same unit/model the Plague Reverant uses, making it a more suiting icon for the Plague Reverant.

[CORRUPTED]Change the Furbolg Lane creep to a Flesh Golem

This is a better-looking creep for the Corrupted rather than an enlarge Furbolg.
And the fact that it is in-game makes things better.

• But with this change, its ability will change:

Poison Gas (Passive)
- Nearby enemy units will be affected by a poisonous gas that deals x damage over time. Last for 3 seconds.
- Area of Effect (AoE) is 350

Unholy Frenzy (Active)
-Increase attack rate by 50%, but drains 4 hit points per second.

Recipe Shops:

You should organize the stuffs you put in each Recipe Shop, and I've something to suggest regarding that matter.

• Villager Model - Boots and Stater Items (Like the Ring of Int, Bracer of STR, Ring of Honor, etc...)
• Peon Model - Weapons (Expect Staffs)
• Acolyte Model - Staffs and other Magical/INT-related items
• Wisp Model - Armor and Defense
• Dranei Model - Orb Effects
• Murloc Model - Miscellaneous (Items that don't belong with any of the other shops)

Though I am not sure that it's the best way to organize the Recipes but it will be a fine start.

 

[Icedrake]

I haven't tested this map out yet, but from the screenshots, I already see some grammar/spelling mistakes that you should probably fix. Proper English just makes the map look better. I'll try to point out any mistakes that I see in all of your screenshots. Screenshots will be numbered; from 1 being your first screen shot, and the last number being your last screenshot.

1.) When it says please wait while The_Flood select the game mode, change the word select to selects the game mode, since there are multiple modes in this game. Also, change the word turn to a turn in the Chosen Heroes mode description.

2.) Strength is the proper spelling for that word, and abilities is the proper spelling for that word.
3.) None
4.) None
5.) In the notice, change has to have.
6.) None
7.) None
8.) Can you give me a copy of that description so I can fix it? It's hard to recopy that whole description and then fix it.
9.) None
10.) "now got a bounty of 100 on his head". Change got to has. Also, make the spaces in between some of the words even. First line has 2 spaces, second has 1, and then the third line has 2 spaces again?

Rest of the screenshots: Unknown is the correct spelling for that word, and Soldier is the correct spelling for that word.

If there are this many grammar/spelling errors in the screenshots, I'm afraid to see how many there are throughout the rest of the game. Please do your best to fix your grammar/spelling errors because it will draw away from how this map looks, and the first impressions of people.

But other than the constant spelling/grammar errors, this definitely seems like a promising map.

 

[DrUnKeN_RiDeR]

Couples of changes...

For Plague Reverant:


[CORRUPTED]Change the Furbolg Lane creep to a Flesh Golem


Recipe Shops:

We already use that model to the necromancers ulltimate summoning so we won't use it but its nice that you come with suggestions

 

[lolreported]

I haven't tested this map out yet, but from the screenshots, I already see some grammar/spelling mistakes that you should probably fix. Proper English just makes the map look better. I'll try to point out any mistakes that I see in all of your screenshots. Screenshots will be numbered; from 1 being your first screen shot, and the last number being your last screenshot.

1.) When it says please wait while The_Flood select the game mode, change the word select to selects the game mode, since there are multiple modes in this game. Also, change the word turn to a turn in the Chosen Heroes mode description.

2.) Strength is the proper spelling for that word, and abilities is the proper spelling for that word.
3.) None
4.) None
5.) In the notice, change has to have.
6.) None
7.) None
8.) Can you give me a copy of that description so I can fix it? It's hard to recopy that whole description and then fix it.
9.) None
10.) "now got a bounty of 100 on his head". Change got to has. Also, make the spaces in between some of the words even. First line has 2 spaces, second has 1, and then the third line has 2 spaces again?

Rest of the screenshots: Unknown is the correct spelling for that word, and Soldier is the correct spelling for that word.

If there are this many grammar/spelling errors in the screenshots, I'm afraid to see how many there are throughout the rest of the game. Please do your best to fix your grammar/spelling errors because it will draw away from how this map looks, and the first impressions of people.

But other than the constant spelling/grammar errors, this definitely seems like a promising map.

Thanks for pointing this out. I'll take a look and check how many of those errors we've already fixed. Anyway, the screenshots you've looked at is extremely outdated and all those grammar errors may have been fixed months ago

 

[Icedrake]

I had no idea those screenshots were that old, my mistake. I'll try out the map soon then, and give you my opinion. If you guys have the time, you should probably get some screenshots from the newer versions showcasing some of the new things you've added.

 

[lolreported]

Okey, sweet! Yes, of course we will, but I don't know when though. We'll see

 

[random.guy27]

We already use that model to the necromancers ulltimate summoning so we won't use it but its nice that you come with suggestions

So, how about my other suggestion?
Are they fine?

And for Necromacer, I may be making a partial remake with him.
And could you make him a little bit bigger? He is too small ATM.
And about his Flesh Golem, it says that you could only target "Friendly UNDEAD unit"
And when I used it on my lane creep, it didn't work since it's not an Undead unit...
Those kind of specific things won't do in AoS games.

EDITED.
I may be out for the week since it will our exam-week this week.
Good luck with your map.

 

[DrUnKeN_RiDeR]

So, how about my other suggestion?
Are they fine?

And for Necromacer, I may be making a partial remake with him.
And could you make him a little bit bigger? He is too small ATM.
And about his Flesh Golem, it says that you could only target "Friendly UNDEAD unit"
And when I used it on my lane creep, it didn't work since it's not an Undead unit...
Those kind of specific things won't do in AoS games.

EDITED.
I may be out for the week since it will our exam-week this week.
Good luck with your map.

I'll take a look at the necromancer, tho i don't think im gonna change him with a remake but who knows.

Im gonna let The_Flood take a look with your item suggestion.

Thanks and good luck to you too

 

[Icedrake]

Okey, sweet! Yes, of course we will, but I don't know when though. We'll see

Well, I tried out the map, and everything worked pretty well. Except for the spelling/grammar. There were definitely quite a bit of errors throughout the map. Other than that, everything was fine and worked well, so nice work overall.

Rating: 4/5 Just get those pesky grammar/spelling errors fixed.

 

[lolreported]

Well, I tried out the map, and everything worked pretty well. Except for the spelling/grammar. There were definitely quite a bit of errors throughout the map. Other than that, everything was fine and worked well, so nice work overall.

Rating: 4/5 Just get those pesky grammar/spelling errors fixed.

Sweet! Thanks for the testing Well, all those errors and spelling/grammar problems will definately be fixed in coming patches ^^ The map will only be better as we update it, so don't worry

 

[random.guy27]

My tests are over and I'm back.

And I've made a new Hero suggestion...

Eldin Sunstrider, the Phoenix Tamer

Some Overview...

He is an INT Caster whose main theme is Fire, Phoenix Tamer, and Magic Damage

His skills:
• Sacred Pyre - A single-target, semi-spammable, high-damage nuke, though it has a high Mana Cost. It could also help your Phoenix.
- "Release a sacred flame that severely burns the targeted enemy units. But if casted onto his own Phoenix, it protects it from any harm and slowly heals it for 5 seconds."

• Curse of Inferno - A spammable, low-damage AoE stun with a twist.
- "Cast a curse on a target. When the curse takes effect, it will send out a paralyzing flame that will stun and damage nearby enemy units. It takes 1.8 seconds before the curse takes effect. Could be casted on both allied and enemy units."

• Banishing Flames - A single-target, "Banish" spell
- "Eldin casts a magical flame that banishes the target to the ethereal planes for a small period of time. Ethereal units cannot attack and have their movement speed reduced by 50%. They will also take 40% more damage from Magic attacks and spells."

• Phoenix - The skill that makes you the "Phoenix Tamer"
- "Summons a powerful Phoenix. The Phoenix burns with such intensity that it damages itself and nearby enemy units. Has Spell Immunity, and Resistant Skin. When a Phoenix dies, it creates an egg that will hatch into a Phoenix."

To know more about him, Click here to go to My blog

And some Visual Change for Items: (Icon & Name)

• Corrupted Hand of Death

Orb of Corruption

• Sorus

Envenomed Spear

• Sword of Critical Wound

Deep Wound Claws

• Weapon of Luck

Fiend Claws

• Arsktarkta

Claws of the Forsaken

• God's Fury

Hammer of Discharge

• Uhmotra

Saevio (*Saevio is Latin for Rage)

• Orksi

Battle Staff

• Light

Voodoo Staff

• Life Stone

Pendant of Energy

• Mana Stone

Pendant of Mana

• Magical Helm of an Old Prince

Helm of Valor

• Sormeza

Helm of Discord

I'm 90% sure that all of the images are in-game, meaning no unnecessary MSI.

Some Criticism with the Potions.

Potion of Healing & Potion of Recovery
• To tell you the truth, the rate of someone buying a Potion of Healing is just about 10%. Why? It is just a lesser version of Potion of Recovery. It is still a non-combat consumable. Though it has 3 charges. So what?! Potion of Recovery could regenerate faster and more.

Potion of Mana & Potion of Greater
• To tell you the truth, the rate of someone buying a Potion of Mana is just about 1%. VERY LOW. Why? Potion of Greater Mana heals more mana. It regenerates mana faster. And is just 20 golds more than Potion of Mana. Now, who would buy Potion of Mana? I wouldn't.

 

[DrUnKeN_RiDeR]

My tests are over and I'm back.

And I've made a new Hero suggestion...


Some Criticism with the Potions.

I like your hero but we already use that model atm. But we could maybe solve that later.

Im gonna do a little changes with the potions cuz you may have a point there about what you said.

 

[random.guy27]

I like your hero but we already use that model atm. But we could maybe solve that later.

Im gonna do a little changes with the potions cuz you may have a point there about what you said.

It's already taken... Ouch.
Well, because that model greatly complements his theme.

How about the visual changes for the items?

I specifically picked those items because
• It either has an imported icon and there are better icons in-game or;
• It has a bad icon and there are better icons in-game.

And also that they have weird, unsuitable names, that's why I also changed their names.

 

[lolreported]

New version released (Patch: 1.9.0a), this patch has three new heroes and a little fixes.

New heroes: Nerubian, Pain and Pandaren! Try them out.

I'm glad to tell you that all heroes are soon done. Then we'll open all current game modes and start make the survival mode and such!

 

[random.guy27]

I WON'T BE IGNORED!
Hehe... Just kidding.

Anyway, you haven't replied to my post.
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It's already taken... Ouch.
Well, because that model greatly complements his theme.

How about the visual changes for the items?

I specifically picked those items because
• It either has an imported icon and there are better icons in-game or;
• It has a bad icon and there are better icons in-game.

And also that they have weird, unsuitable names, that's why I also changed their names.

 

[lolreported]

I thought I could leave that answer to Drunken_Rider because you were talking. Anyway, the changes seems good for me. I'll see what we'll do