[Altered Melee] Full-Scale Assault Soldiers of War Edition

[WaerercraftKillers]

Waerercraft Presents...

Full-Scale Assault Soldiers of War Edition!

Plot:

Spoiler

WORK IN PROGRESS!!!
(Plot removed for the time being.Wait for a new plot ok)

Features:
AI Support (Thanks To Blizzard)
Two Factions To play The Humans Or The Orcs
Custom Things such as Attack modifiers,and Pics
More Features are Coming soon

CommandsCurrently)
-zombie Complete
-music
-boss Not Made
-super Not Made

NEWS:
2/3/2014
Added Dev Version of soldiers of war So that Reviewers will actualy give more sggestions to that map. Remember to Report me Bugs!

1/31/2014
The the creeps are now fixed!
and some improvments too!
More Quests and Some Tips are comming Soon!

Credits:

Not Final!
jk2pach
Illidan(evil)x
qassamzed
Frankster
Cavman
VIRUS_OF_MADNESS
Talon the Mage
WILLTHEALMIGHTY
stonneash
JB_McKnight
Kofi_Banan
Callahan
epsilon
Kofi_Banan
SataX
abriko
HappyTauren
Mechanical Man

Special Thanks to:
Blizzard (For The Map)
Frankster (For The Space Orcs)

In Case That the modeler is not in the Creds Comment me.

Status:
Units:49%
Descriptions:40%
Commands:40%

Screenshots:

Too Small Sorry!

Plans:

A Superweapon (Wait for Spell To Come out)
Boss Mode (A Powerfull Faction)
More Descrptions WIP (and a Plot too wait for it.)
Edit more Units. WIP
Add more Quests WIP
Edit more items WIP

Download:
FSA SOW v.0.95B
FSA SOW DEV VERSON

Changelog:

0.01 Dev. Started
0.95 Inital Release
0.95B Fixed and added Custom Damage Modifiers,etc.

 

[WaerercraftKillers]

This is my First map,BTW No Comments?

 

[LordVandor1]

More descriptions.
No pics,no clicks.

 

[WaerercraftKillers]

Sorry these screenshots are tga files witch hivE dosen't allow in my album

Im Adding Screenshots later.

 

[WaerercraftKillers]

More descriptions.

What Do You Mean More Descriptions?

No pics,no clicks.

What!? That means no Downloads!? OMG.

 

[Awsan]

Sorry these screenshots are tga files witch hivE dosen't allow in my album

Im Adding Screenshots later.

Find an image converter on the internet to convert the tga files into jpg files. Then you can post them c:

 

[WaerercraftKillers]

Already done okay Just View the Screenshots Already ok.

 

[WaerercraftKillers]

Well The Map Will be DEAD If there is no downloads.


EDIT: Sorry to be a little demanding.

 

[SuperbAvalon]

Review

Terrain:
4/5 It's good. Has doodads, trees in proper places, hills and good mixture of tile.

Gameplay:
2/5 It wasn't very fun. The Quest tab is just two quests saying "Destroy the Orcs". The whole red vs. blue, Human vs. Orc concept is good. I like that. Also, you have random taverns and such at the start of the map.

Map Description:
1/5 It's bad. You're not really explaining it and the way you explain what you do have written down is clumped together and it doesn't make sense.

"...destroyed.People are starting to become Orcs but since the commander dosen't like that to Happen so" Bad grammar and it's confusing.

Overall Rating:
2/5 Correct the grammar and structure of your words, fix up the quests. Either get rid of them or have them serve a purpose to make the game more fun and think about what kind of crowd you're trying to pull in to play your map. Creeps named 'Badbutt Rebel' aren't very attractive. I don't feel like I'm actually commanding a deadly force of soldiers, that makes me think why anyone would call themselves 'Badbutt Rebel'. Try something like 'Rebel Fanatic' or 'Rebel Scout' Now I'm thinking "Shit, what if there is some rebel base? Will I be attacked by them? Are there more?" With 'Badbutt Rebel' I'm just thinking: What am I doing? This isn't fun.

If I sound harsh I don't mean to be! You had great models and this map has a lot of potential! Keep improving

2.5

 

[WaerercraftKillers]

Ok, I Will do good Promise!

 

[WaerercraftKillers]

This is weird that theres a dev version of no reviewers.

 

[WaerercraftKillers]

... *yawn* no one reviewed me.....

*fovever alone*

 

[WaerercraftKillers]

*forveer sleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeply to have a new review about the dev version.*

 

[WaerercraftKillers]

500 views.... Yayy. But not about 50 downloads and no other reviews! Ohhhhh please.

 

[Heinvers]

You know you need to put some screenshot to attract more users. I personally want to see how it looks like. Then I'll try it.

 

[LordDz]

Yeah, the screenshots you have are kinda hard to see what's going on in them..

 

[WaerercraftKillers]

sorry i don't know how to do this stuff

 

[TheWhiteWolf]

Try to use some bb code to enchance your map description. You can make some lists:

• And add colors to it?
• Or hide stuff to intrigue people.
  Spoiler

  It helps.
• Provide more information. Take a piece of paper and write down what you should let people know, then type it here.

Tables

These very useful.

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Best of luck to you mate

 

[WaerercraftKillers]

Fine.

 

[WaerercraftKillers]

*bump*