The Golden Garden

This is a place in my project's world, Origon. The Dawn of Life project. The place is the lands right outside the capital city of the Life Elves.

"This place, peacefull and warm. This place, The Golden Garden, is a place of peace and harmony, no war should ever touch this magical grass-land. allas.."
- Khaine Lifeheart.

I like it very much, especially the sunset +rep

There are rays of light coming from a very different direction than the sun.

I knew this one would come. Yes their comming from a different angle, but their not rays of light, or shall not resemble rays of light at all.. <.<

I guess alot of lag, with the large amount of grass over the ground? :O

Not bad, dosen't really get my attention though.

I like it, but I think you should make the fog a little more gradual, not such an orange wall. Anyways, +rep.

The mid/background is blank. There's the tower, a bit of emptiness, then abrupt fog. Tehfix!

That one hill that's halfway between the foreground and the background looks plain. I'd get rid of it, or put some trees on it. Make sure to scale them so they keep the distance looking proper.

Nah, not really much lag, my PC is too good for that
And, guys, sometimes your a bit TOO observative! Wery well, give me some moments and I'll fix it.

The WE lags before most computers do. No matter how good your computer is, the wc3 engine can't handle a ton of doodads or units.

The rays around the sun have like a space inbetween them and the sun.

i like it.

only problem is the clashing fog - sky

Either change the sky to fogged sky, or lessen the fog to 1000z 6000y

one more thing. The COLOR scheme is great

There, did some fixes. Hope you like it better now ^^

Still to bright

Too bright? wtf.. was that a problem.. ? <.<

I like the brightness... it gives a warm sensation quite adecuate for what this image represents.

It looks good but to be honest I think you used a bit to much doodads if you are going to use this as a map to play on.
Reduce the amount of grass and trees in the background is what I would do if you were going to make this a playable map.
As art it looks uber. ^^

Did I ever mention it was to be a playable map? I rarely make playable terrains, and if they ARE playable, I will state that PROPERLY.
Anyways, thank you ^^

lol,

superlag