SvA (Map)

Moderator · Feb 18, 2009

20:51, 24th Feb 2009
bounty hunter2: An AoS styled map that uses Dota heroes and spells. Along with bad terrain and poor Object Editor Work, this map is unacceptable. You have one month to update it, else you will find it Rejected.

You can find my full review Here.

bounty hunter2 · Feb 19, 2009

Here is my rating and comment:

Rating system

Altered Melee:
1 - 10 points go on originality √
1 - 10 points go on terrain √
1 - 10 points go on bug free √
1 - 10 points go on gameplay/fun factor √
1 - 10 points go on lag √
1 - 10 points go on balance
1 - 10 points go on drops
1 - 10 points go on Object editor work √
1 - 10 points go on proper submission and crediting √
1 - 10 points go on scripting √
1 - 10 points go on camera work
1 - 10 points go on music and or voice acting
1 - 10 points go on dialog
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Percent	Grade	Status
0 - 34%	1/5	Rejected
35 - 49%	1/5	Reviewed
50 - 64%	2/5	Reviewed
65 - 79%	3/5	Approved
80 - 89%	4/5	Approved
90 - 100%	5/5	Approved

The table may vary if needed.

Points

Originality: 2/10 X
Are you serious? Dota heroes with Dota spells? Come on man you have to be more original then that. Elves fighting the Horde... I mean this is all seen and done before.

Object Editor Work: 4/10 X
Poor descriptions mostly. Improve them, grammar errors.

Bug Free: 8/10 √
Worked fine on a 1v1 battle, I don't know would it work same full house. Didn't get to the end.

Terrain: 1/10 X
A huge map with a lot of empty spacing and no terrain. Why? Make it smaller, fill everything up. You need better overall terrain, study the techniques of terraining and improve.

Scripting: 5/10 √
Well it was generally fine, you removed unused player slots from the multiboard, no stucks.

Gameplay/Fun Factor: 2/10 X
A huge map, takes a lot of time to get anywhere. Unoriginal heroes, bad terrain a little amount of items. You have a lot of grammar errors aswell.

Lag: 6/10 √
Long loading time, no lag.

Proper submission and crediting: 1/10 X
Credit Dota for the spells and heroes please. Add images.

Conclusion

In overall: 29 / 80
38% minimal not 50% met.
For the hive grade: 1/5 I suggest this map for: Rejection
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In overall it is a very bad AoS. I suggest:

- Remove Dota stuff please
- Add your own heroes and spells
- Shorten the map size, it is huge
- Improve terrain
- More items

This are only little suggestions, but to make it better you need a lot more. I suggest starting from scrap.

Good Luck, bounty hunter2
I might not be checking this topic for some time. If you have any questions about the review or you update the map and want me to check it again, feel free to PM me or Visitor message me at any time.

Joe-black-5 · Feb 19, 2009

well when i played the map first thing i noticed is the horrible language you need to fix all language mistakes and change the "things shop" into "Items shop", i have chosen the Mountain Giant hero and he was named "Tiny" aka dota clone, he have the first ability same as dota (Toss) with a neat description and all others have a unclear one.
when i casted Toss the Hero Tossed a unit and kept tossing nothing and got stuck.
The terrain is very very bad and the map is empty.
the map is fulled of imba things (creeps, towers, abilities ...) and unplayable so its a 1/5 from me for now.
sorry man try working harder on it and drop all the dota stuff and make it original
good luck

HellCEzAR · Feb 21, 2009

this is just test version) ok i'm fixe that's all)

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