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Moderator
11:57, 26th Jun 2011
-Kobas-:
Status: Rejected
Comment
20:44, 1st Jul 2009
Linaze: RPG map with several custom systems, such as a backpack system that allows you to hold more than six items at once. The gameplay wasn't anything special, you traveled around killing enemies that gave reputation points that were needed to gain access to certain areas, the hero's abilities were simple Blizzard spells such as Fire Bolt and Frost Nova. The map's terrain wasn't so good and especially the tile variation could be greatly improved, some doodads here and there wouldn't hurt either. There were lots of grammatical and spelling errors in the cinematics and quests that should be fixed. The description here at the Hive was decent, but it could use some improvements, such as adding some screenshots (in hidden tags) and some more information about the map, instead of your history as a mapmaker. To conclude, work on the terrain and the English and I'll approve this, but not in its current state.
-Kobas-:
Status: Rejected
Comment
Linaze: RPG map with several custom systems, such as a backpack system that allows you to hold more than six items at once. The gameplay wasn't anything special, you traveled around killing enemies that gave reputation points that were needed to gain access to certain areas, the hero's abilities were simple Blizzard spells such as Fire Bolt and Frost Nova. The map's terrain wasn't so good and especially the tile variation could be greatly improved, some doodads here and there wouldn't hurt either. There were lots of grammatical and spelling errors in the cinematics and quests that should be fixed. The description here at the Hive was decent, but it could use some improvements, such as adding some screenshots (in hidden tags) and some more information about the map, instead of your history as a mapmaker. To conclude, work on the terrain and the English and I'll approve this, but not in its current state.
