Somebody rate this?

[Gottfried]

Dorek, the Fourth controlled the Orcs at forty years ago, one day he wants to step back... he signed his heir. Dorek, the Fifth. Dorek received a strong empire from his father. Dorek IV lived in peace with his neighbors, the Humans of Crade and the Dwarves of Meissa, these lands welcomed Dorek V as the new orc ruler. Dorek V invited Gregor, the Second and Drakul, leader of the Dwarflands. A feast happened... everyone eats, drinks a lot. Later the drunken Drakul went to sleep... forever. He beheaded by an orc servant in his bed. Gregor, the Second?
Well... he escaped from the massacre with his bodyguards and went away, chased by Dorek V's orc hunters. Next day, the king of the orcs announced the conquest of Crade, Meissa and Fanul. Dorek V collected his army of raiders and siege the border of Crade, in here Gregor II's generals led their troops to protect the border. Dorek V separated his army to five group, each of them contained 10000 orc. Three group reached Crade's capitol Detas. Dorek V sack the town of Detas, and kill Gregor II and his family. Dorek, lead his army back... he hopes that he follow his ancestor Dorek I or Jathaloo III, who known as fierce pillagers, Dorek V found his father weak, who almost bow before humans, dwarves or petty faeries... disgusting is Dorek first thought. He will take their gold, resource and women. Dorek even wants to give the faerie prisoners to his gremlin supporters... Dorek V returned home, and found his castle and capital razed. Why? Who? And the news... why he not instructed about this? Not enough time for thinking, the orcs shouts about attackers! Dorek V went to a tower's top room and see what he want. Dwarves and skinny, armored flying women... faeries. As a young orc, Dorek V befriended a faerie, called Vestu, who seems to like him, but when Dorek, as prince give her flowers to show his love, well... he thought to Joseph, the Orc... who married with a tall faerie and his wife give him three wonderful halfling (half orc and half faerie). Vestu laughed him and ignored Dorek. Dorek stunned and planned his revenge. Dorek V shared a lot of friendly moments with Vestu, like drinking, eating, training and speaking under a tree. Dorek thought himself as a romantic orc, so he will execute Vestu under a tree, the same one where he confess his love and rejected by Vestu. Yes... he will execute the wench... the wench with muscular, toned feminine body, sharp intellect, long smile and a greatly pompous behaviour. Dorek V touched his neck. It is cold liquid. Blood, arrive from his neck like waterfall.
- The King is attacked! They shouted...
Dorek V fell to the floor and feel his life empty, sad, and annoying. He think to his father... Dorek IV, Vestu, he loved her, but rejected. He remembered back Dorek I, did he died so shameful? No...

I wrote this for an user, who asked a tale. After I receive some ratings, I will give him/her this story.

 

[Kino]

A couple of things.
- Paragraphs really help in making something more readable.
- Ratings based on what?

You're basically listing a series of events and how they relate to a few characters.
The issue with that, is how anyone could take this source material and write a good/bad/average piece of writing based on it; the quality of which is independent of how interesting/original etc. your source material is.
A good writer can in theory make something interesting regardless of what the source material is, the inverse also being true.

Unless you're only intending to give the user a vague lore framework and not do their actual writing.

 

[Gottfried]

Unless you're only intending to give the user a vague lore framework and not do their actual writing.

I planned this exactly.

 

[Kino]

I planned this exactly.

Sure thing.
In that case, I dont see why you need ratings of any sort.

 

[Gottfried]

Well... I just wanted to know, how awesome is my idea. In a scale of 1 to 5.