Pencil work

[UnholyDobry]

Here are some of mine drawings done with pencil and some of them colored in photoshop (not best coloring job i know). oh and last one is how it should look like . Feedback?

 

[UnholyDobry]

Its been a month i rememberd to check this trad and no comments, cmon i want some feedback i drew few more but im to lazy to upload them since no1 even sow these, feedback pleasse.

 

[CombatTheWombat]

Very blurry and monotone. Facial proportions need a lot of work. Overall you need a lot more practice but I definitely see lots of potential and a lot of imagination here. And those two things are all you need to eventually become a good artist.

 

[RaijinSpark]

Rawr!! those are nice

 

[TDR]

Sorry I don't have anything to say about your stuff (except generic stuff you'll find over at conceptart.org and others), but your avatar is pure win.

 

[Somnium]

One thing that grabbed my attention, was the eye!

I really like it, I think it's drawn pretty well

Overall it's pretty good, specially the girl she's well drawn Your on the right track jsut need to practice