My first terrain

[nickex]

Hi, this is my first serious terrain please tell me what you think.

 

[Thyrael]

Water won't shine that bright in a dark night. Try to darken the colour of those doodads to make them fit in the enviroment.

 

[nickex]

Water won't shine that bright in a dark night. Try to darken the colour of those doodads to make them fit in the enviroment.

I didn't change them cause it's full moon and the moon highlights the water and if you look into the distance it darkens

 

[PsychoNerdial]

The ground needs just a tiny bit of Noise

 

[Archipelago]

Thats quite nice, though it seems a little wierd that the fourground looks like its day and then 50 meters away it goes to plain black...

Good first anyway!

 

[Nbah]

No, noise isn't needed anywhere. Use the Raise and Lower tool to achieve optimal awesomeness and realism. The scaling of the river rushes is way off and looks bad surrounding the river like that. The whole jungle thing is rather empty. To achieve moon lightened shiny effect, use the glow doodad instead of leaving the river with full color blast. I would add background mountains and maybe work on the camera. I luek the sentinel on rock thing.

 

[Megafyr]

Nights should be darker. Even the moon (with help from the sun) can't make everything that bright.

 

[chilla_killa]

I would add more grass, some rocks and like already said use the raise/lower tool.
I dunno if it would be good, but maybe add a little fog.