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Magic Steam Giant
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It's made very sloppily. I would make it a bit more uniform.
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points for semi-originality but pretty badly done and doesn't really look like a magic... steam... giant....
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Do you think it's good? How can you spend three hours on this? You must be somewhat new to the WE, and doodads, because I could whip that up in minutes. I don't mean to offend you, but there are so many things wrong I don't really want to critique it... but I will.
1. Flat - Never leave your terrain flat. It looks boring and not very natural.
2. Environment - Even in a terrain that does not focus on environment you should still make sure that the environment is good. One ugly thing and it ruins a terrain. Add trees, rocks, plants, and small doodads.
3. Distance Fog (DF) - This is under 'Scenario - Map Options'. I'm not going to tell you how to work it, just figure it out. This will add to any terrain I guaranty.
4. I'm going to be blunt (not that I haven't been already), that steam giant is ugly. This is a robot! I don't expect you to make something that good, but you can do better than this.
5. Tile variation - You seem to have tried, but it's not good. Use more tiles, and make it more natural. It just takes practice.
6. End of the World - Never show the edge of the map. Ever.
Well that's a few major ones. Try a new terrain, and make sure it's of some quality before posting it.
Do you think it's good? How can you spend three hours on this? You must be somewhat new to the WE, and doodads, because I could whip that up in minutes. I don't mean to offend you, but there are so many things wrong I don't really want to critique it... but I will.
1. Flat - Never leave your terrain flat. It looks boring and not very natural.
2. Environment - Even in a terrain that does not focus on environment you should still make sure that the environment is good. One ugly thing and it ruins a terrain. Add trees, rocks, plants, and small doodads.
3. Distance Fog (DF) - This is under 'Scenario - Map Options'. I'm not going to tell you how to work it, just figure it out. This will add to any terrain I guaranty.
4. I'm going to be blunt (not that I haven't been already), that steam giant is ugly. This is a robot! I don't expect you to make something that good, but you can do better than this.
5. Tile variation - You seem to have tried, but it's not good. Use more tiles, and make it more natural. It just takes practice.
6. End of the World - Never show the edge of the map. Ever.
Well that's a few major ones. Try a new terrain, and make sure it's of some quality before posting it.
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Very... creative.
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The head and arms are not stright.
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