Jon's Journey - Chapter Based Map

[LordHavoc]

Hey guy's i got bored and decided to start working on a map. I spent a few hours on this one. Even though there is only 10-15 minutes of game play. May bey even 5 if you want to whiz through it. I haven't finished it completely but im thinking of having more chapters. I'm not sure though, if anyone remotely likes chapter one ill make a long story line.

Now i was bored, but now im excited and can't wait to release bigger, larger chapters.


>>DOWNLOAD CHAPTER ONE<<


The maps unprotected so feel free to edit but be sure to give credit.



UPDATE: Story Line


Prelude - Cinematic ( 10 minutes in length )
Chapter 01: Chapter 1 takes place as Jon is fleeing his homeland after being charged with doing magic. Which is totally wrong of course. But who would believe Jon? Jon is fleeing to the fishing town of Freeport, where hopefully he can find passage to another land.

Chapter 02: ( I've got a perfect plan in my head, just don't want to spoil it for you )

Here's some Lore.

Magic is outlawed in the Jon's homeland. His homelands name = ??? .

Freeport.
Freeport has no guards and no walls because the town was built for escape. No questions are asked at Freeport. Its the place where people run when everything they know has failed them. Original the Freeport ideal was great, but soon bandits have taken to raiding merchants and travelers that wander the path. Infact the king himself has rather abandoned Freeport, upon his decision not to upgrade the towns road throughout the forest of nod. Or cleaning out the bandits. But nevertheless Freeport is a vibrant town, with people sailing across the great sea or escaping what they know.

Jarken Bandits
A few bandits have taken the forest of nod and corrupted it into their own haven. Exploiting Freeport's ideals the bandits roam free.
The bandits run their band like an army, having ranks.
Jarvic = 1 week in the band ( Gets a 1/10 share in bounty )
Jarvin = 6 months in the band ( Gets a 2/10 share in bounty)
Jiken = 1 year in the band ( gets a 4/10 share in bounty )
Jorken = 2 years in the band ( get a 6/10 share in bounty)
Jintor = Leader of the band ( gets a 9/10 share in bounty)
Most bandits don't last longer then the Jiken stage, either killing each other or getting bored with easy pickings and fighting town guards.

* Map name: Jon's Journey
* Creator: Lord.Havoc
* Stage: Alpha Testing
* Summary: 1 player RPG
* Map features: 3rd person camera
* Miscellaneous Info (credits?) Hellscream Model created by Ders

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

What's the story?Any quests?Something new?You just told you started a map and spent hours in it and that it's not protected.What else?Edit your post plz.

 

[HeretoDLstuff]

It looks a aweful small map....I wouldnt really bother to dl it and play it for only 5 mins of playing when I dont even know what in the world its about.

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

It's only the first chapter.The thread needs MUCH work.

 

[HeretoDLstuff]

Well...Dont make the chapters to short or we will have millions of maps that are all just chapters...Make less of them and make them longer, I advise.

 

[daw_guy]

OK please tell some story line.
Please take away I was bored

Hey guy's i got bored and decided to start working on a map.

Most maps that start when some1 is bored usually don't have as much effort.

Besides that it is looking good.

GL

 

[HatoZILLA]

It's only the first chapter.The thread needs MUCH work.

the THREAD needs work? the entire MAP needs work

 

[Mini-Me]

Please read the rules.

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

HatoZILLA you still haven't played the map.So,you can't talk about it.Wait for the final result.No map is good at start.

 

[HeretoDLstuff]

HatoZILLA you still haven't played the map.So,you can't talk about it.Wait for the final result.No map is good at start.

How do you know he didnt? You have super powers?

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

It's easy to understand it.Sometimes you can see some posts are stupid.(Like some of mine)

 

[HeretoDLstuff]

But how can you tell he didnt go test it? Nothing in any of his posts made it sound like he didnt or did.

 

[FamousPker49]

Ok, I gave you the benefit of testing this very poor map, if you actually thought it out much more, and developed some sort of storyline more than "A Banished Swordsman" and if you did more terrain than a few trees along a pathway, with the whole map completly flat, this couls possibly be interesting, but until then all you get is what you see in his post

 

[LordHavoc]

Well i originally felt like making something with a 3rd person view. At least one person seems interested so I'll start writing up a story line. Some of the English in there is horrible and i know the map is small.

The next map will be at least 128x128. And I'm going to customize the hero with a custom voice set. I'll edit my first update with plans.

 

[FamousPker49]

That would be greatly appreciated

 

[HatoZILLA]

i did test it sasuke......i just didnt like it, not to much fun

 

[LordHavoc]

I've got to come up with something to make it more fun. Chapter 02 is going to be great! I'm sure you'll enjoy it HatoZilla.

 

[HeretoDLstuff]

i did test it sasuke......i just didnt like it, not to much fun

See what I mean? He did! Well, when chapter 2 comes out we will see.

 

[HatoZILLA]

I've got to come up with something to make it more fun. Chapter 02 is going to be great! I'm sure you'll enjoy it HatoZilla.

What have ya got in store thatll have me likin it? xD

 

[FamousPker49]

I am quite happy that you have updated your post, makes your map look more professional, but I think your Third Person camera should be adjusted abit, bring it farther back, and have somewhat of a height offset, it will greatly improve your map

 

[HatoZILLA]

he has to go on a violent killing spree for me to like it....maybe i dunno. i might like it, good luck