Fallen-Warrior

[demonhunter50]

The Fallen is a race of dead warriors that seek revenge,they fight and hate only the Demons and The Risen,they are not afraid of death and they are ready for anything,necromancy is forbidden in the Fallen law but,they were revived by it.

I wanna make a pack with this guys.

 

[Arowanna]

You should improve your knowledge of colors first mate.
The green eyes and yellow teethes looks like MS Paint, improve the shading.
(Which program are you using?)
The blue- and magenta-colored pants doesn’t fit at all.
And the skin is basically a recolor, or you can see many of the old features.

And the "lore" behind him, be more creative and explain stuff in more depth

 

[demonhunter50]

I made it with Photoshop but I fucked it with GIMP (big mistakes actually)

 

[Arowanna]

Well, open Photoshop and get started mate!
And remember, try to find some tutorials on colors and shading!

 

[demonhunter50]

My photoshop expired,I think ill totally redo the whole skin

 

[Hawk]

It is cartoonish,need more work

 

[demonhunter50]

Damn,It was perfect but I edited it with GIMP and now I tottaly fucked up the whole skin.I'll make it again.