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redscores
05-26-2008, 07:24 PM
Hey, this is my newest Terrain, it somehow feels not alright, maybe you can give a feedback so I can change it asap to make it look better.

Uses UTM

bjartmar
05-26-2008, 07:40 PM
Uhm, maybe the barrens wind and rocks? It doesn't fit into grassy landscapes IMO

redscores
05-26-2008, 07:42 PM
It was thought for a savanna, a savanna is rocky and there are grasses too.

Just_Spectating
05-26-2008, 07:42 PM
the grass right up in your face needs to be toned down a bit. (color wise)

EDIT: also, you should add more shrubs. custom colored.

redscores
05-26-2008, 07:49 PM
Okay, thanks for the tips, i will update it soon.

Gilles
05-26-2008, 07:49 PM
What's wrong with the sun/moon redscores? It's what I told you to do, although moons don't look great using glow model. Maybe try deleting a few so it's less bright.

redscores
05-26-2008, 07:52 PM
Not with the moon, overall, it turned not so great out, trying to reduce ugliness.^^

Huurka
05-26-2008, 07:53 PM
Does not look that much like a savannah to be honest :/

redscores
05-26-2008, 08:00 PM
Updated it in the Main Post.

Keiji
05-26-2008, 08:16 PM
well, you said it was night? still theres a sun ? O.O
and yes, the wind dont fit, and i dont like the rocktile in the front either, looks like its human made, or is it naturall that so many completely identical rocks ley together?
And it would look better if you had it like daytime and madde another fog. And the animated grass models in the middle of the screen crashes with the orange grass tile. Make something that moothen it out a bit. and THEN you got a good pic :D

X.e.r.e.X
05-26-2008, 08:18 PM
I think that waterfall thingy is a bit too bright if its night and it seems to come out of the ground o_O

redscores
05-26-2008, 08:18 PM
It is a moon. hm and i will take your stuff in consideration.

Oziris
05-27-2008, 08:45 AM
I dont like the waterfall it looks very nooby! the rest is good but the moon looks more like a Spirit boom in DBZ so make it more moony it has to be gray!

redscores
05-27-2008, 10:59 AM
eh, very nooby is no constructive criticsm, well, cant make the glow grey, tried it, sorry. And the Moon is in a night of Full-Moon White.

How can i improve the waterfall?

X.e.r.e.X
05-27-2008, 01:00 PM
Tint it like the water is in barrens, cause barrens water isn't blue like that

redscores
05-27-2008, 02:21 PM
Wah in the editor the sky is messed, its white and black mixed and with different skies it is nearly all black and looks weird -.-

Huurka
05-27-2008, 06:43 PM
Dont make it so Cliffy, as far I'm aware savannas are pretty flat.

redscores
05-27-2008, 07:16 PM
These are hills... a savanna has only hills...

http://www.kaufmanntrekking.ch/bilder/Hintergruende/Kilimanjaro,%20alpine%20Savanne%201024x768.jpg

Thats a savanna.

It is not 100% exactly the same, but plain it would not look so good, and not every savanna is the same.

Huurka
05-29-2008, 05:04 PM
http://staffwww.fullcoll.edu/tmorris/elements_of_ecology/images/savanna_2.jpg