Jak-The-Ripper
12-30-2009, 01:55 PM
Jak
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-Hello, hiveworkshop.
I have been working on a cinematic, and I am looking for some comments and constructive criticism for what I have so far. If anyone has ideas for the plot, please Private Message me!
Download Rough Draft Optimized.w3x for free on uploading.com (http://uploading.com/files/beeb7e3d/Rough%2BDraft%2BOptimized.w3x/)
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The Ripper
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-Hello, hiveworkshop.
I have been working on a cinematic, and I am looking for some comments and constructive criticism for what I have so far. If anyone has ideas for the plot, please Private Message me!
Download Rough Draft Optimized.w3x for free on uploading.com (http://uploading.com/files/beeb7e3d/Rough%2BDraft%2BOptimized.w3x/)
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The Ripper