10:07, 3rd Jul 2009
zombie2279: The mouth and jaw part seems to be okay, but the rest is rather lacking. The proportions are all messed up. The mose part looks like a beginning of a trunk, the eye parts look like goggles and the rear part of the skull is rather misshaped.

To fix that, I recommend doing an overall shading reworking at the parts mentioned, sink the eye part and make the part around the brain bigger. You might want to add some improvements that make it look less generic, cracks, more colors, whatever.

Rejected until updated.

this one looks better. pretty good work dude

no. first. ist way too generic.
second, skulls don't have wrinkles and you but wrinkles on it. making it look way too fleshy and not hard enough.
third. the shading does not give the apperance of a natural skull.
you really need to fix this. its a 2/5 from me.

Its little drastic rating See on your icons

GJ, pretty good!